Advice on programmed drums track

[Marcello]

Hi there, I recorded this track with NI Studio Drummer, since I'm not a drummer but a guitar player, I need some experienced drummer or mixing engineer to tell me if the track sounds natural enough, if the drums are played realistically enough or there is some feel or part that sound strange, and also if the mix/sound of the drums looks cool or not.

I kept the bass and the scratch guitar just for you to grasp the grove and put it into the context. (please notice the scratch guitar is player very badly and definitely not on time in some parts but just as a reference)

The drums is supposed to be a bit chaotic and not too "standard", the genre is post hardcore

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mNlNV3L5KQNdR5sIjxjGLGWt5EAqfAG_/view?usp=drive_link

[Wookiee]

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[Marcello]

5 hours ago, Wookiee said:

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[Marcello]

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Here’s also the song played live during rehearsals, I basically tried to copy exactly what the drummer was doing and reprogrammed it. Indeed he plays a lot of cymbals, do you think is still too much cymbals even here?

 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1faRpHgbcZqiXm4tKhaBAL0xkrAQu-rBP/view?usp=drivesdk

[KSband]

Yes. The cymbal is right in the front of the mix, if you're going to crash on it like that it needs to be backed down in the mix a lot. It sounds like there is an overhead right on the ride.