Paul Bush Posted March 13 Share Posted March 13 So I twiddled around with it and re did the solo and backing vocals outro and thats about it cheers ...as always all comments are welcome 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted March 14 Share Posted March 14 This one has a catchy melody, good song. Tasty acoustic guitar lead. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted March 14 Share Posted March 14 Excellent writing Paul. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted March 14 Share Posted March 14 'the smell of closing time' - such a good lyric. Nice work. ? Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted March 14 Author Share Posted March 14 2 hours ago, AndyB01 said: 'the smell of closing time' - such a good lyric. Nice work. ? Andy Thanks Andy only very occasionally I manage to surprise myself, although I do try , cheers paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted March 15 Author Share Posted March 15 20 hours ago, Paul Bush said: Thanks Andy only very occasionally I manage to surprise myself, although I do try , cheers paul Hold on Andy here´s another one from my hit unrequited love song ``Watching you ´´ (hahaha) `` even in a two dog race I wouldn't make second place ´´ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted March 15 Share Posted March 15 Cool song Paul. Love the backing vocals in the chorus. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted March 15 Share Posted March 15 Your passion is showing! Your vocal is heartfelt which makes the lyrics come alive. Another winner for you! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 26 Share Posted March 26 So right off the bat; ?‘s ? Is there some “personal” experience here, or is this “we write songs about people we’ve never met, in places we’ve never been, doing things we’ve never done”? (Ralph Murphy IIRC) Understand that I’m adjusting to new hearing aids, and they are pretty “toppy”. I hear a pretty harsh “squeak” in the acoustic solo at the 2:30 mark. I know how difficult these can be to “fix”. My solution has been D’addario half rounds. Downside, you lose a little “sparkle” and the “G” string doesn’t last long (I keep extras on hand). The upside, it all but eliminates the squeaks. Overall very nice, much enjoyed. Left a like and comment at SoundCloud. t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted March 27 Share Posted March 27 Really solid tune. The vocals are great and the acoustic sounds excellent. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted March 27 Share Posted March 27 Works well here, there is something very personal about the whole song. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted March 28 Author Share Posted March 28 On 3/27/2024 at 2:41 AM, jwnicholson78 said: Really solid tune. The vocals are great and the acoustic sounds excellent. Hi Jeff , thanks for commenting, up until now Ive always recorded the acoustics direct more through laziness than trying to get a good tone a good friend of mine always complained that i should mic up the guitars , My Takamine sounds great through a desk for ``live work´´ but is let down for recording ( muddy ) anyways I took some time with this recording and miked it up then panned up left and right , to be honest its more luck than judgment cheers paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted March 28 Author Share Posted March 28 Once again I´m humbled by all the really nice comments Ive received , Ive been very busy of late and not getting into my studio very often , and not checking out all of your songs as much as I usually do , so I am really grateful .... slowly the summer will be upon us and i´ll be off a- wandering , hiking up and down the Austrian mountains , to keep healthy cheers Paul bush 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted March 31 Share Posted March 31 Hi Paul Great track, very well written. Good playing especially the lead solo and a good mix Really enjoyed the listen Cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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