Tim Smith Posted September 27, 2023 Share Posted September 27, 2023 (edited) Here is one I made with a mind to sound something like Tangerine Dream. I have noted a few things that I think are holding the track back. -Tempos in 2nd half are too fast to "mate up" with the intro - Intro takes quite awhile to develop. Fix- -Slow down tempos in second half, maybe add a few more elements. The idea is to keep a celtic feel even in the electronic sections. I think I half achieved this, but still more go do. - I'll leave the longer intro even though it is a bit 'extended'. Edited September 27, 2023 by Tim Smith 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted September 28, 2023 Share Posted September 28, 2023 Hi Tim . . . very interesting and flowing piece, what I really like here are the change points to the many different sections, really smooth the way it melds into the next idea, really well written there . . . the part that went awry for me was when you introduced the heavy chorus guitar part around 2:21, somehow that section departs from the overall vibe of everything else, perhaps intended, but thought I would point it out as a first time listener. Your opening description makes it sound like you're still developing this project, so best of luck on your Celtic journey . . . hope you can post some updates for us here. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted September 28, 2023 Share Posted September 28, 2023 silky wonderful.jack c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted September 28, 2023 Share Posted September 28, 2023 Hi Tim - I loved that intro although to me it sounded more like Trees than Tangerine Dream. The transition 2.05 to 2.25 i don't think worked to well for me Apart for that enjoyed this Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted September 30, 2023 Share Posted September 30, 2023 Interesting piece, lot's of changes going on. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Smith Posted October 2, 2023 Author Share Posted October 2, 2023 Thanks for the advice guys. I'll see about that guitar part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted October 6, 2023 Share Posted October 6, 2023 I Really liked the pristine highs in this. Very nice EQ wise. I think a few of the electric guitar note stabs could be tamed a little. Several of the changing different sections could be the main theme in completely different songs. I didn't have a problem jumping to the fast tempo parts and Really liked them. Maybe cross fading into some of them would also be nice. I think you could lose the section @noynekker mentioned and not hurt the song at all. I also think a little silence before the song starts and a longer fade out would be nice. All in all a Very Impressive production. Actually I Loved it .. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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