Glenn Stanton Posted January 10, 2023 Share Posted January 10, 2023 (edited) so, firstly, get your mind out of the gutter ? one day i was sitting in my living room playing my acoustic guitar and the electricity went off. i really only noticed because all of the electrical appliances went quiet, which was nice. about 20 minutes later the power kicked back on. and my TV set and cable box turned on without sound. and it was a soap opera channel... there were two fabulous women on either side of a nicely dressed man, and the brunette was getting all the attention and talking, whilst the blond on the other side was looking for the opportunity to get a word in and get the man's attention. she just had this look on her face like "why aren't you coming on to me since i'm just as, if not more, attractive than the brunette"... i just started strumming a I - iim vamp and using my Neil Young impression, sang "come on to me" and it made me laugh, so i had to make a song about forlorn attention-getting on a social scene. of course, it could be misinterpreted so a group dance may be, erm, awkward... ? major update - basically a complete re-do ? Edited December 12, 2023 by Glenn Stanton 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 10, 2023 Share Posted January 10, 2023 Hi Glenn I like this - i see what you mean regarding the break - apart from that liked this a lot Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreeEarCandy Posted January 10, 2023 Share Posted January 10, 2023 Its a good song. Interesting inspiration. Seeking attention is the nature of the beast when it comes to communication. Can it be blown out of proportion? Absolutely (the brunette ). Ignoring people is also a problem that can get out of hand (the blond). 2 sides of the same coin-communication. Regarding the break issue you mentioned, relax and think about for awhile. The music is telling you where it wants to go. Don't ignore it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted January 10, 2023 Share Posted January 10, 2023 Guitar sound is really good - sounds great on my AA Hi-x cans - agree with the others the bridge will come - give it some rest and come back to it. Enjoyed the listen Andy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted January 10, 2023 Share Posted January 10, 2023 Great start. I look forward to the completed project! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 10, 2023 Share Posted January 10, 2023 Nice song, good work Glenn. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted January 15, 2023 Share Posted January 15, 2023 Glenn, sounds good. I like it. The 4 notes behind the lyrics "come on to me" have a nice hook that could be developed more. But idk they also sound a little familiar? -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 18, 2023 Share Posted January 18, 2023 so great that you recorded this nice guitar acoustic, so hard to get right the bass sits right in there I came it was time I was satisfied 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 23, 2023 Share Posted January 23, 2023 Agree with Freddy. I'll hold the "like" for the final mix... t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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