SUPAREELS Posted June 26, 2022 Share Posted June 26, 2022 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted June 27, 2022 Share Posted June 27, 2022 Nice song, I like the strings on the chorus. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted June 27, 2022 Share Posted June 27, 2022 (edited) Man, this is NICE! The strings and lyrics almost had me in tears. You really know how to write a tear jerker. One small suggestion. Do some automation on your vocal track (lead) and ride the fader on some of the words. A few tend to get lost in the orchestration. ?John B Edited June 27, 2022 by Johnbee58 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 27, 2022 Author Share Posted June 27, 2022 1 hour ago, Johnbee58 said: Man, this is NICE! The strings and lyrics almost had me in tears. You really know how to write a tear jerker. One small suggestion. Do some automation on your vocal track (lead) and ride the fader on some of the words. A few tend to get lost in the orchestration. ?John B Thanks for taking the time to comment and I didn't notice the lyric was a little lost until you mentioned it, most probably because I wrote it a know the words .. so well spotted and thanks I'll have a go at bringing them forward as you suggested ... ( A good cry ain't bad for you even though we're blokes LOL ) ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted June 28, 2022 Share Posted June 28, 2022 Steve, the mix really seems like you're hiding those powerful vocals and lyrics away . . . and I really love the song ! Dip the 200 hz instruments ? Usual great stuff otherwise 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 28, 2022 Author Share Posted June 28, 2022 3 hours ago, noynekker said: Steve, the mix really seems like you're hiding those powerful vocals and lyrics away . . . and I really love the song ! Dip the 200 hz instruments ? Usual great stuff otherwise I think that's a great idea ... I'll try that out and see if it makes a big change in the dynamics of the song. I sang this one with emotion as I thought it suited the feel ... I now feel I might have over cooked it. Thanks for the compliment m8 ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron_Pko Posted June 28, 2022 Share Posted June 28, 2022 Beautiful song man! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 28, 2022 Author Share Posted June 28, 2022 2 minutes ago, Ron_Pko said: Beautiful song man! Thanks for the compliment Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted June 28, 2022 Share Posted June 28, 2022 Nice song, pleasant mix, though I agree you need to bring the vocal a little more forward. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted June 29, 2022 Share Posted June 29, 2022 I'll hold my "like" for the re-mix... t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted July 7, 2022 Author Share Posted July 7, 2022 (edited) On 6/29/2022 at 9:38 PM, DeeringAmps said: I'll hold my "like" for the re-mix... t And now it's remixed ... do I get a tick or cross t .... Edited July 8, 2022 by STEVE POOLE 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted July 8, 2022 Share Posted July 8, 2022 16 hours ago, STEVE POOLE said: do I get a tick or cross t (fixed) Presently on the road, limited time and internet access; but I will get to it! t lots of “Toms” on the forum. “Little t” is a moniker left over from my youth, I was “little t” until I was out of “knee pants”; but I was “t” to my father until the day he died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted July 8, 2022 Author Share Posted July 8, 2022 36 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: Presently on the road, limited time and internet access; but I will get to it! t lots of “Toms” on the forum. “Little t” is a moniker left over from my youth, I was “little t” until I was out of “knee pants”; but I was “t” to my father until the day he died. I'll remember that ... so little 't' it is .... and will be ...with respect, my friend ALB Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted July 8, 2022 Share Posted July 8, 2022 Nice track - well mixed, sounds very good Cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted July 18, 2022 Author Share Posted July 18, 2022 Many thanks for listening Nigel sorry for the late reply your comment means a lot ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted July 18, 2022 Share Posted July 18, 2022 Hi Steve I didn't hear the 1st version so can't compare the mixes. It's a beautiful song and yet it's all about pain and loss. You transmit that feeling to the listener so well in the music and in your voice. (I know, I've said all this before) Always a big fan Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted July 18, 2022 Author Share Posted July 18, 2022 (edited) 19 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Hi Steve I didn't hear the 1st version so can't compare the mixes. It's a beautiful song and yet it's all about pain and loss. You transmit that feeling to the listener so well in the music and in your voice. (I know, I've said all this before) Always a big fan Bjorn Many thanks old friend Steve Edited July 19, 2022 by STEVE POOLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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