It's My Turn

[Keith Wilby]

Unashamedly a soppy ballad. ?

https://www.bandlab.com/wilbyforce/itsmyturn-a2a97656?revId=111ad1d0-ade1-ec11-b656-281878319acf

[Hidden Symmetry]

Nice one Keith, enjoyed it.

[KSband]

You write a good pop song, good work there.

[Jim Fogle]

Good song.  Nice arrangement.  I like your tasteful use of delay and reverb.  I would place the vocals a little more in the forefront and move the drums more into the background but that is a taste decision.  I love the balance of the rest of the tracks.

By-the-way I appreciate you are posting your songs to Bandlab.

Edited June 1, 2022 by Jim Fogle

[Wookiee]

Nice Keith, worked well hereat The 4077.

[Keith Wilby]

Drums dialled back and vocal brought forward. Also an extra vocal on the middle 8 if you listen hard enough ?

https://www.bandlab.com/wilbyforce/itsmyturn-ebc71934?revId=b651aedd-55e2-ec11-b656-281878319acf

[jack c.]

good job.some voice notes are off.jack c.

[mark skinner]

Keith , you've sure been on a roll lately. I thought this was Great ! and a Powerful performance. I Especially liked the bridge. Very creative.      Enjoyed it ..   mark

[DeeringAmps]

?  ‘s
You’re actually playing a chromatic harp, or is that a synth patch?

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I’d vary that kick a little, it’s eighth note between hits; right? (when it’s doubled)

I shorten that up a bit once in a while