Keith Wilby Posted June 1, 2022 Share Posted June 1, 2022 Unashamedly a soppy ballad. ? https://www.bandlab.com/wilbyforce/itsmyturn-a2a97656?revId=111ad1d0-ade1-ec11-b656-281878319acf 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hidden Symmetry Posted June 1, 2022 Share Posted June 1, 2022 Nice one Keith, enjoyed it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted June 1, 2022 Share Posted June 1, 2022 You write a good pop song, good work there. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim Fogle Posted June 1, 2022 Share Posted June 1, 2022 (edited) Good song. Nice arrangement. I like your tasteful use of delay and reverb. I would place the vocals a little more in the forefront and move the drums more into the background but that is a taste decision. I love the balance of the rest of the tracks. By-the-way I appreciate you are posting your songs to Bandlab. Edited June 1, 2022 by Jim Fogle 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted June 2, 2022 Share Posted June 2, 2022 Nice Keith, worked well hereat The 4077. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted June 3, 2022 Author Share Posted June 3, 2022 Drums dialled back and vocal brought forward. Also an extra vocal on the middle 8 if you listen hard enough ? https://www.bandlab.com/wilbyforce/itsmyturn-ebc71934?revId=b651aedd-55e2-ec11-b656-281878319acf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 3, 2022 Share Posted June 3, 2022 good job.some voice notes are off.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted June 3, 2022 Share Posted June 3, 2022 Keith , you've sure been on a roll lately. I thought this was Great ! and a Powerful performance. I Especially liked the bridge. Very creative. Enjoyed it .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted June 4, 2022 Share Posted June 4, 2022 ? ‘s You’re actually playing a chromatic harp, or is that a synth patch? t I’d vary that kick a little, it’s eighth note between hits; right? (when it’s doubled) I shorten that up a bit once in a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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