mind mine

[jack c.]

 

[treesha]

I like the guitar riff and drums, bass is cool, and the creepy mood and ominous vocals would go great in a crime movie !

[jack c.]

11 hours ago, treesha said:

I like the guitar riff and drums, bass is cool, and the creepy mood and ominous vocals would go great in a crime movie

thank you.jack c.

[Larry T.]

nice touch you gave this one jack....humorous with the sting of truth to it....i'd bring up and/or play with the EQ on the drums and cymbals to get a bit more clarity from them ????

[jack c.]

4 hours ago, Larry T. said:

i'd bring up and/or play with the EQ on the drums

thanks larry.jack c.

[Jesse Screed]

the other will throw in the towel

but so what

[DeeringAmps]

I'm not sure I'd call this "weird, really weird" or "yuckie" Jack.
Is it just me, or is the kick only in the left can?
I'd center the kick up and you could add some 1/16 (1/32?) notes to it, it fits the genre.
I'd push the vocal up a bit as well.

t

bang your head, metal health will drive you mad

[PhonoBrainer]

Well who knows what issues need to be addressed on this one?

Mix issues, I mean. What, did you think I meant something else? 

Guitar tones are nice and clear, and the vocals are guttural yet very discernable. It holds the listener's attention, no problem there.

I'd vote for the kick on the left to merge with the kick which I think is on the right, if it's not a low tom right? Perhaps its too conventional for what you want to do here, I get that. Judging by this one, you are mixing things 1,000 times better than a year ago, it's a very clear mix so well done!

cheers,

-Tom

 

[jack c.]

15 hours ago, Jesse Screed said:

the other will throw in the towel

but so what

what does this mean?jack c.

[jack c.]

14 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said:

Well who knows what issues need to be addressed on this one?

                                    what do ya mean

Mix issues, I mean. What, did you think I meant something else? 

what do ya mean

14 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said:

 

I'd vote for the kick on the left to merge with the kick which I think is on the right, if it's not a low tom right?

                          2 toms

Judging by this one, you are mixing things 1,000 times better than a year ago, it's a very clear mix so well done!

                        this really means lots to me.when i started i didn't have any concept of the stuff i have learnt from the forum.especially tom deering me mentor.jack c.

 

[jack c.]

15 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

Is it just me, or is the kick only in the left can?

yes tom and toms are center.bass on left.jack c.i just figured out how to sidechain after too many years of not understanding said concept.jack c.

[Guest]

Cool guitar riff Jack - keep on rocking ?

Andy

[Jesse Screed]

4 hours ago, jack c. said:

what does this mean?jack c.

It means you are a music making machine!

and you are it

and I abdicate

Keep going hip cat!

[DeeringAmps]

2 minutes ago, Jesse Screed said:

Keep going hip hep cat!

fixed it for ya...

[Jesse Screed]

51 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said:

fixed it for ya...

?

[jack c.]

19 hours ago, Jesse Screed said:

It means you are a music making machine!

welp jesse so nice of ya to say.i appreciate it much.jack c.

[jack c.]

23 hours ago, AndyB01 said:

Cool guitar riff Jack - keep on rocking

thank ya andy.jack c.

[Bapu]

Overall your mix here is pretty good. The kick is the weirdest thing in this piece for sure.

[jack c.]

22 hours ago, Bapu said:

Overall your mix here is pretty good.

thanks mate:jack c.

[Makke]

Nice rock song and performance.