Paul Bush Posted January 11, 2022 Share Posted January 11, 2022 Hi chaps well this ones been on the back burner for some time , so I made some (many)changes and heres what came out , itS another rant about , politics and media etc all comments are welcome cheers P.. .......the end will faded out at some stage.... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 11, 2022 Share Posted January 11, 2022 wonderful huge sound.drums need quantizing.voice and harmony need tuning.really nice chord changes.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted January 11, 2022 Share Posted January 11, 2022 Yeah, Paul, those drums need some work and they need to be up in the mix too! Some good changes in this and your voice is really good -- phrasing and tone. Some very nice guitar lines and such particularly in the instrumental section -- lots of creativity-- another good one ? -- Allan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 11, 2022 Share Posted January 11, 2022 Good song. Definitely some timing issues though. Do some audio transients so see how far off things are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted January 12, 2022 Share Posted January 12, 2022 Hi Paul . . . this grimsby thing is turning into a really great tune ! I think it would be time well spent tweaking this mix, because this is a good one. The lead vocals and political attitude lyrics really work for me, and the guitar solo in the middle really caught my attention, also the instrumental part right after that with the bass guitar high end melody . . . has something special. You have such a great feel for the background harmony vocals, oohs and aahs here really work well. Overall mix wise I'm hearing mostly that the bottom end needs boosting . . . yes everything's clear, because of that, but so missing that low eighties punch you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted January 12, 2022 Share Posted January 12, 2022 preach it. truth will never be a commodity and information is always in formation. I like how this song goes through several phases. It feels like a complete experience that way. Like Bruce said, the bass can be a little more pronounced. Great song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 12, 2022 Share Posted January 12, 2022 Nothing I can add other than what has already been recommend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 12, 2022 Share Posted January 12, 2022 I'll echo all of the above. t What's your overall level on the mix, seems a bit light, had to turn it up quite a bit... Not that that's a bad thing... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted January 12, 2022 Author Share Posted January 12, 2022 52 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: I'll echo all of the above. t What's your overall level on the mix, seems a bit light, had to turn it up quite a bit... Not that that's a bad thing... Yeah Hi t , Ive left myself a bit of headroom on this one before I master, this is the first time I`ve managed to do this as usually I push it all to the max leaving nowhere to go later on so i´m really experimenting with this one , the drums are all seperate, and many tracks are using lots of busses giving me easyer control at the mix stage ....well thats the idea anyway ..or failing that I`ll just have a few beers and push record ......cheers P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted January 14, 2022 Share Posted January 14, 2022 Great job on the lyrics and vocals ! I thought the lead breaks and guitar tones were awesome. Really impressive song. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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