I Needs Something

[jack c.]

 

[Wookiee]

Would you be sad if like me you need help ??? Interesting and some eclectic tune

[jack c.]

2 hours ago, Wookiee said:

Would you be sad if like me you need help ??? Interesting and some eclectic tune

i got help.thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

[Douglas Kirby]

I get a punk-rock vibe from this one.  I noticed no bass in this - not that I could hear. Interesting as always.

Happy New Year.

[Wookiee]

1 hour ago, jack c. said:

i got help.thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

Lucky, they told me I was beyond help of any kind 

 

[jack c.]

7 hours ago, Wookiee said:

Lucky, they told me I was beyond help of any kind 

i have study/used psychology for some 30 years so who ever said that is wrong.jack c.

[jack c.]

7 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

get a punk-rock vibe from this one.  I noticed no bass in this - not that I could hear. Interesting as always.

the guitar in 5 ths and bass are real close but there is a good volume bass sounding grunge.jack c.i love punk stuff.

[DeeringAmps]

Jack, your lyrics are always interesting.
Nowhere is it written that they must rhyme or conform to some sense of meter.
Although, I do believe in creative writing class rhyme and meter were stressed.
Keep 'em coming...

t

Wow, I was absolutely sure I had hit "submit reply"

[Tim Smith]

I can feel the anxiety in this one. Another original. I hope this person ( hopefully not you) gets help of the right kind.

Thanks for sharing.

-Tim

[jack c.]

20 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

Jack, your lyrics are always interesting.
 

18 hours ago, Tim Smith said:

I hope this person ( hopefully not you) gets help of the right kind.

thanks tom for listen/comments.

so many of me songs are about me and other situations in me life and i did get help,but their is still emptiness and i wonder will it ever get filled???????????????jack c.

[Starship Krupa]

I like the vocorder'd backing vox. Reminds me a bit of Sparks.

[jack c.]

3 hours ago, Starship Krupa said:

I like the vocorder'd backing vox

thanks mate.jack c.

[ramscapri]

 

Nice distortions there Jack and the song has a smooth rap feeling vocals in rock style... good one ?

[jack c.]

4 hours ago, ramscapri said:

Nice distortions there

thanks mate.jack c.