PhonoBrainer Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 (edited) Hi Steve! The male/female universality thing actually came across strongly, so that's a win. And anyone who has been around the block a time or two will know the torture of relationship drama! Your video works. And I can 100% relate to media sourcing issues! Most of us are at the mercy of telling our stories with royalty-free stock clips . . . which is like making a collage using only the fake pictures they sell with the frames . . . Good luck to us all, making this have depth!!! You do good stuff, keep it up! Cheers, -Tom Edited December 29, 2021 by PhonoBrainer 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 Yeah great song and well sung , and the background voices really added that something extra ..cheers p 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted December 30, 2021 Author Share Posted December 30, 2021 18 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said: Hi Steve! The male/female universality thing actually came across strongly, so that's a win. And anyone who has been around the block a time or two will know the torture of relationship drama! Your video works. And I can 100% relate to media sourcing issues! Most of us are at the mercy of telling our stories with royalty-free stock clips . . . which is like making a collage using only the fake pictures they sell with the frames . . . Good luck to us all, making this have depth!!! You do good stuff, keep it up! Cheers, -Tom Great understanding mate ... thanks ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted December 30, 2021 Author Share Posted December 30, 2021 13 hours ago, Paul Bush said: Yeah great song and well sung , and the background voices really added that something extra ..cheers p Thanks for the comment Paul ? ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted December 31, 2021 Share Posted December 31, 2021 Steve . . . don't have a lot to add to the other great comments here . . . just really love the song, brought a tear for me . . . didn't really watch the video too closely, I think the song says it all, thank you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted December 31, 2021 Author Share Posted December 31, 2021 8 hours ago, noynekker said: Steve . . . don't have a lot to add to the other great comments here . . . just really love the song, brought a tear for me . . . didn't really watch the video too closely, I think the song says it all, thank you. Knocked out with your comments .. thankyou ATB Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted December 31, 2021 Share Posted December 31, 2021 I'll echo the above comments, you've conveyed the emotion well, very much bitter/sweet; so ?'s here! t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted December 31, 2021 Author Share Posted December 31, 2021 On 12/27/2021 at 4:33 PM, Larry T. said: well done, vocals, playing, arrangement, production, mix.... Thankyou for the comment Larry .. and for listening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramscapri Posted January 5, 2022 Share Posted January 5, 2022 Deep Piano and Guitar there Steve do convey the depth of emotions of the song title... vocals gel in very well and the flute well supplements the mood of the song... Very nice and well done overall ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ant_in_wales Posted January 5, 2022 Share Posted January 5, 2022 I liked the big piano opening - quite Lana del Rey. The voice is really strong and clear, mix all blends together well. I wonder if there should be more of a change at 1'45? A full stop and some new sound? Key change for 8 bars? Different style of singing? Spoken word interlude? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 6, 2022 Author Share Posted January 6, 2022 On 1/5/2022 at 12:57 PM, Ramesh Kavassery said: Deep Piano and Guitar there Steve do convey the depth of emotions of the song title... vocals gel in very well and the flute well supplements the mood of the song... Very nice and well done overall ? Many thanks for taking the time to comment and listening. JFTR I used the flute pad as I get a bit tired of guitar solos ... anyway I ain't that good at playing the guitar ! ( Maybe I'll get James to do GS ...LOL) ALB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 6, 2022 Author Share Posted January 6, 2022 23 hours ago, ant_in_wales said: I liked the big piano opening - quite Lana del Rey. The voice is really strong and clear, mix all blends together well. I wonder if there should be more of a change at 1'45? A full stop and some new sound? Key change for 8 bars? Different style of singing? Spoken word interlude? Well .. That might be a good idea ?. As I have just sent the stems to my old mate and fellow song-smith (Gary Brun ), My hope is he may feel there's something he might like to do with this .. who knows. Thankyou for the comment ( checking out your stuff .. I like 10 weeks ... I'm an old timer now at 70, but remember my college days ... maybe all too well LOL ) Steve 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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