David Sprouse Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 I'm better at song writing than making videos. Is the eagle at the end too foreboding? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 David, this song has some serious vocal and instrumental power to it . . . really enjoyed the listen ! She sings like she really means it. You mention the eagle . . . ha, he didn't bother me at all. Interesting to watch (and listen to) though, there is some low res imagery, but I'm no movie critic, still scrambling to get my first music video together . . . very well done sir ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 Unusually I watched the video, normally I find them to distracting so do not bother. She has a nice vocal with some real power. You should have included the strike. Good tune @David Sprouse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hidden Symmetry Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 (edited) Enjoyed the track & video David. Solid tune & performances, excellent singer & vocals. I have a minor critique you take with a grain of salt; around 0:13- those few grace notes (right side, a harp vi?) & the piano chord at 0:29 kind of threw my ear off... -but a great tune! Edited May 24, 2021 by Hidden Symmetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 Nice song and strong vocal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 David, I agree with almost everything everyone said. As far as around 0:13- those few grace notes (right side, a harp vi?) & the piano chord at 0:29, that's just David. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 That was quite a vocal performance - and it's a fine song as well. By the way, I liked the eagle at the end of the video. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted May 24, 2021 Share Posted May 24, 2021 A beautiful song and vocal performance. I never know what to expect from you, and this is a pleasant surprise. This is the kind of song I want to listen to again and again, so you nailed it with me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted May 28, 2021 Share Posted May 28, 2021 David Great song. Who's the singer? I've taken a lot of pictures and videos of bald eagles. That pipsqueak call of theirs always amuses me. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted May 28, 2021 Share Posted May 28, 2021 Dave, this is so great. I LOVE everything about it. So much energy in the music, singing and imagery. The eagle fits perfectly. ? John B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted May 30, 2021 Share Posted May 30, 2021 Hi David what a great track - loved it, especially the vocal performance. And the video is cool too, a great start - what video package did you use? Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted May 30, 2021 Share Posted May 30, 2021 Nice song with good vocal performance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted May 30, 2021 Author Share Posted May 30, 2021 On 5/23/2021 at 8:41 PM, noynekker said: David, this song has some serious vocal and instrumental power to it . . . really enjoyed the listen ! She sings like she really means it. You mention the eagle . . . ha, he didn't bother me at all. Interesting to watch (and listen to) though, there is some low res imagery, but I'm no movie critic, still scrambling to get my first music video together . . . very well done sir ! Thanks for watching. Ya I optimised it for *youtube* during export and this is how it came out... Kind of grainy. On 5/24/2021 at 4:19 AM, Wookiee said: Unusually I watched the video, normally I find them to distracting so do not bother. She has a nice vocal with some real power. You should have included the strike. Good tune @David Sprouse I didn't want to upset the kids. Thanks for watching wookie. On 5/24/2021 at 8:33 AM, Hidden Symmetry said: Enjoyed the track & video David. Solid tune & performances, excellent singer & vocals. I have a minor critique you take with a grain of salt; around 0:13- those few grace notes (right side, a harp vi?) & the piano chord at 0:29 kind of threw my ear off... -but a great tune! Ya I know where you're talking about. If we ever re-record this, we'll fix that. :D:D On 5/24/2021 at 8:53 AM, KurtS said: Nice song and strong vocal. Thank you for watching Kurt S. On 5/24/2021 at 10:23 AM, Jesse Screed said: David, I agree with almost everything everyone said. As far as around 0:13- those few grace notes (right side, a harp vi?) & the piano chord at 0:29, that's just David. Just me?! :D:D Thanks for watching jesse. On 5/24/2021 at 12:54 PM, Douglas Kirby said: That was quite a vocal performance - and it's a fine song as well. By the way, I liked the eagle at the end of the video. I'm glad you like the eagle, it's kind of strange that the segment right before it is of a condor. Thanks for watching and listening. On 5/28/2021 at 12:32 PM, bjornpdx said: David Great song. Who's the singer? I've taken a lot of pictures and videos of bald eagles. That pipsqueak call of theirs always amuses me. -Bjorn This singer is Jennifer McGill. Ha, pipsqueak call, but they're really gorgeous birds, no? On 5/28/2021 at 2:25 PM, Johnbee58 said: Dave, this is so great. I LOVE everything about it. So much energy in the music, singing and imagery. The eagle fits perfectly. ? John B We were a little concerned that the lyrics were to artsy (qua poetry),but it does kind of all come together nicely. Thanks for your kind appraisal, John. 12 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Hi David what a great track - loved it, especially the vocal performance. And the video is cool too, a great start - what video package did you use? Nigel I used premiere pro for this one, but I used zero transitions. It needs some more fiddling. Thanks for the kind comments nigel. 6 hours ago, Makke said: Nice song with good vocal performance. Thank you again for watching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyline_UK Posted May 31, 2021 Share Posted May 31, 2021 A very nice song David, it builds beautifully. The vocalist put it across just right. A nice mix too. John Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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