Andrew Rhodes Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 My second attempt. Not sure if I've put too much into this, and still quite green when it comes to mixing, so a little unsure about it. Some bits not quite right, but I've spent enough time on it now - I think you get to the point where you've had enough! Drives you mad messing about too much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 (edited) Well done. Only thing I noticed out of the ordinary were some plosives (I'm listening on consumer stereo). Love your voice. Edited April 16, 2021 by David Sprouse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 Made some notes while listening Very good production - reverbs and delays sound great. Sounded a bit country in places. Love the chorus. Bass line - A+. Clear voc and blends well with instruments. Sounds pretty darn good to me. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 Good song ! A few tweeks and I think you'll be there. I think the drums were a little weak and could bring a little more power to the song if it is up a few DB and retune the snare if you can .. I also thought the horns were a Little too loud. I find that after putting one to rest for a while and not listening to it for a couple of weeks , when I come back to it , It's Way more obvious what needs to be done. Great performance and vocals. Enjoyed it .. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Rhodes Posted April 17, 2021 Author Share Posted April 17, 2021 (edited) Thanks for comments and suggestions guys. @David Sprouse I know what you mean about the plosives - I think I was standing too close to the mic, but didn't notice the effect till later. I thought about doing the vocals again, but thought it would be too much effort! I'm lazy ? @mark skinner I think I might try your suggestions. To be truthful, I've never thought about tuning snares for a particular song, but it probably makes sense. Would you say the tuning needs lowering? And I know what you mean about leaving things for a while, then returning - it's quite surprising how different things can sound! Edited April 17, 2021 by Andrew Rhodes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted April 17, 2021 Share Posted April 17, 2021 Andrew , I actually thought it needed to come up a little and try to EQ a little more "crack" in it. It's not bad at all where it is , but I think it could be improved giving the drums a little more power and presence. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted April 17, 2021 Share Posted April 17, 2021 do i hear bowie?well done all around.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted April 18, 2021 Share Posted April 18, 2021 MIX comes across reasonable here as note by some the drums are a little back in the mix but that would just be a taste thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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