Mixed & Mastered on cakewalk, Can you hear all of the instruments??

[JEISONX]

Thoughts on the mix??

 

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Edited March 11, 2021 by JEISONX

[jack c.]

bring up voice a tad.low boom instrument take a tad of bottom off.recording job real fine.jack c.

[JEISONX]

Thank you Jack!

[DeeringAmps]

Not my genre Jeisonx, so take this with a grain of salt.
Do I hear all the instruments; yes.
Would I mix the vocal the way you have? No (but again, not my genre)
The bass line just feels like a "drone", no definition or presence.
If that's what you are shooting for, then good.
That to me is the weakest link here, regardless of genre; I think.

HTH,

tom

[JEISONX]

@DeeringAmps Thank you for your input I really appreciate it & I know is not your genre but still id like to know what would you do differently to the vocals?? & I do get what you're saying with the bass line, the instrumental was premixed by someone else so I only  had the two track to work with. How could I add definition to the base line of the two track??