Bill Campbell Posted January 23, 2021 Share Posted January 23, 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted January 23, 2021 Share Posted January 23, 2021 Well done Bill. Don't be shy and bring up the volume a little on that bongo in the Right hand speaker? we all paint different pictures... that's how I would paint mine, 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 23, 2021 Share Posted January 23, 2021 I think it would sound nice with some melody over the whole track. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 23, 2021 Share Posted January 23, 2021 nice job recording and chords.maybe a sax or guitar playing a melody.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bill Campbell Posted January 24, 2021 Author Share Posted January 24, 2021 18 hours ago, garybrun said: Well done Bill. Don't be shy and bring up the volume a little on that bongo in the Right hand speaker? we all paint different pictures... that's how I would paint mine, Agreed the sound stage could use a little work. Lately thinking too much like a musician and not enough like an engineer. ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted January 24, 2021 Share Posted January 24, 2021 Look what you done and started! It's a cool vibe for sure and I appreciate your clean guitar chording and tone. The bass part was super supportive, yet maybe a bit "roomy" in the mix? I agree it's wanting a lead instrument of some kind, at some point. Did you knock down the fingersqueaks? Is so, you might let a little more back in? It would likely give you even more air in your already-pretty-cool guitar tone. good one! cheers, -Tom 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 25, 2021 Share Posted January 25, 2021 Short and sweet! I kind of see it as a cue. VO on the front and then out as the organ comes in... t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 25, 2021 Share Posted January 25, 2021 nicely played and good tune but as others have said dying out for some melody or vocals perhaps Good stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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