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 SECOND VERSION  Thanks for the input Lynn & Bjorn

 1 ST VERSION TO LIVE OUR LIVES AGAIN

 

I can't remember everything that went before

I can't recall every word that we said

But when I think of you every now and then

Oh if only we /I could live our / my life ( lives) again

 

The day we met we were only kids back then

I remember people said it wouldn't last

But something in your eyes, so trusting and so blue

Was all it took to spend my life with you

 

Let us go down to riverside,where the oak trees used to grow

Holding hands just like we used to do

And watch butterflies dance on the rivers flow

 

M8

Let us go down to riverside,where the oak trees used to grow

Holding hands just like we used to do

And watch butterflies dance on the rivers flow

 

 

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Steve,  I always look forward to hearing another song of yours and this one didn't disappoint.
Melodic ?
Kind of sad in a good way. I think I mentioned wistful once.
Seems like drums struggling to fit in. Might be better without?
Timing off in a couple of spots,  no biggie
Abrupt ending.
Just minor nits. This is a very good song that puts me in a nice mellow mood. 

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On 1/4/2021 at 3:44 PM, jack c. said:

nice recording job.sing the voice again and combine both for fuller sound.nice harmony.a tad less on snare fills.jack c.

 

17 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said:

Like Bjorn said, I always look forward to hearing your songs, and this is no exception.  Your lyrics, voice, melody, and sparse arrangement create a mood that I seem to crave.  Have a marvelous new year, and stay creative!

 

19 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

Steve,  I always look forward to hearing another song of yours and this one didn't disappoint.
Melodic ?
Kind of sad in a good way. I think I mentioned wistful once.
Seems like drums struggling to fit in. Might be better without?
Timing off in a couple of spots,  no biggie
Abrupt ending.
Just minor nits. This is a very good song that puts me in a nice mellow mood. 

On 1/4/2021 at 2:22 PM, Wookiee said:

Nice track, shame it cuts off so abruptly at the end, mix sound nice here on the Adam's

Thanks guys .. this is a bit of a bubble gum type song with the usual key suspects but I was trying out my expertise on playing drums to a track in real time .. I guess I miss the ball there Bjorn LOL .. Still I recovered my pride and have provided a serious remix ..no drums ... and a  l  o  n  g   ending  no snips ? ...Plus wishing EVERYONE on this site, some of which feel like real family.  all the best for your coming year ... stay well XX

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