SUPAREELS Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 (edited) SECOND VERSION Thanks for the input Lynn & Bjorn 1 ST VERSION TO LIVE OUR LIVES AGAIN I can't remember everything that went before I can't recall every word that we said But when I think of you every now and then Oh if only we /I could live our / my life ( lives) again The day we met we were only kids back then I remember people said it wouldn't last But something in your eyes, so trusting and so blue Was all it took to spend my life with you Let us go down to riverside,where the oak trees used to grow Holding hands just like we used to do And watch butterflies dance on the rivers flow M8 Let us go down to riverside,where the oak trees used to grow Holding hands just like we used to do And watch butterflies dance on the rivers flow Edited January 6, 2021 by SupaReels 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 Nice mellow song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred's Gratis Scores Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 I like the backing vocals. The synth fit very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 4, 2021 Share Posted January 4, 2021 Nice track, shame it cuts off so abruptly at the end, mix sound nice here on the Adam's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 4, 2021 Share Posted January 4, 2021 nice recording job.sing the voice again and combine both for fuller sound.nice harmony.a tad less on snare fills.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted January 5, 2021 Share Posted January 5, 2021 Steve, I always look forward to hearing another song of yours and this one didn't disappoint. Melodic ? Kind of sad in a good way. I think I mentioned wistful once. Seems like drums struggling to fit in. Might be better without? Timing off in a couple of spots, no biggie Abrupt ending. Just minor nits. This is a very good song that puts me in a nice mellow mood. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted January 5, 2021 Share Posted January 5, 2021 Like Bjorn said, I always look forward to hearing your songs, and this is no exception. Your lyrics, voice, melody, and sparse arrangement create a mood that I seem to crave. Have a marvelous new year, and stay creative! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 6, 2021 Author Share Posted January 6, 2021 (edited) On 1/4/2021 at 3:44 PM, jack c. said: nice recording job.sing the voice again and combine both for fuller sound.nice harmony.a tad less on snare fills.jack c. 17 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said: Like Bjorn said, I always look forward to hearing your songs, and this is no exception. Your lyrics, voice, melody, and sparse arrangement create a mood that I seem to crave. Have a marvelous new year, and stay creative! 19 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Steve, I always look forward to hearing another song of yours and this one didn't disappoint. Melodic ? Kind of sad in a good way. I think I mentioned wistful once. Seems like drums struggling to fit in. Might be better without? Timing off in a couple of spots, no biggie Abrupt ending. Just minor nits. This is a very good song that puts me in a nice mellow mood. On 1/4/2021 at 2:22 PM, Wookiee said: Nice track, shame it cuts off so abruptly at the end, mix sound nice here on the Adam's Thanks guys .. this is a bit of a bubble gum type song with the usual key suspects but I was trying out my expertise on playing drums to a track in real time .. I guess I miss the ball there Bjorn LOL .. Still I recovered my pride and have provided a serious remix ..no drums ... and a l o n g ending no snips ? ...Plus wishing EVERYONE on this site, some of which feel like real family. all the best for your coming year ... stay well XX Edited January 6, 2021 by SupaReels 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted January 6, 2021 Share Posted January 6, 2021 I don't mean this in a negative or patronising way... But I love your simple yet honest arrangements that seem to bring a peace in a hective fast paced world.. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 7, 2021 Author Share Posted January 7, 2021 11 hours ago, garybrun said: I don't mean this in a negative or patronising way... But I love your simple yet honest arrangements that seem to bring a peace in a hective fast paced world.. Thank you. Thanks Gary ... I think? LOL ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 8, 2021 Share Posted January 8, 2021 Definitely sounds better - I just listened to both and prefer this one. Good song well played Good Stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 8, 2021 Share Posted January 8, 2021 On 1/6/2021 at 1:27 PM, garybrun said: love your simple yet honest arrangements Sometimes less is better. t 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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