Kevin Walsh Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 (edited) Thanks for everyone's great feed back. I've finished (yet another) remix and I think this song is ready for another round of criticism. Your input on ANY aspect of the song is most welcome! Happy New Year! Update: I've posted a new mix taking into account all of your feedback. Please let me know if it hits the mark better. Don't forget to refresh the page before listening. Thank you! Edited January 5, 2021 by Kevin Walsh 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 Sounds good, still really like this song. The back ground vocals sound nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 Great song and good mix. I love the vocals and guitar tones, very polished! I'd like to hear the bass guitar a bit more, which would make this a stellar mix, imo. However, this is really good as is. Happy New Year to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred's Gratis Scores Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 I like the smooth sound to this, very nice! The only feedback I have is that the very first part felt a little "jumbled" and my brain had a hard time grabbing on to something to find the beat. It's a great song and very much enjoyed it. Mix sounds good on my Sony MDX-1000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 1, 2021 Share Posted January 1, 2021 nice recording job.nice sounding voice and harmony,bring up the low voice harmony.i like your guitar parts.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 1, 2021 Author Share Posted January 1, 2021 18 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said: Great song and good mix. I love the vocals and guitar tones, very polished! I'd like to hear the bass guitar a bit more, which would make this a stellar mix, imo. However, this is really good as is. Happy New Year to you! Good feedback as always., thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 1, 2021 Author Share Posted January 1, 2021 53 minutes ago, jack c. said: nice recording job.nice sounding voice and harmony,bring up the low voice harmony.i like your guitar parts.jack c. Thank you! People are always telling me to turn down the bg vocals, guess I went too far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 1, 2021 Author Share Posted January 1, 2021 18 hours ago, Fred's Gratis Scores said: I like the smooth sound to this, very nice! The only feedback I have is that the very first part felt a little "jumbled" and my brain had a hard time grabbing on to something to find the beat. It's a great song and very much enjoyed it. Mix sounds good on my Sony MDX-1000. Thanks for your feedback! Are you talking about the short little instrumental bit at the very beginning? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 1, 2021 Author Share Posted January 1, 2021 19 hours ago, kurt soderquist said: Sounds good, still really like this song. The back ground vocals sound nice. Thank you, Kurt! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 Hi Kevin, I take the fact the bass line is a little low in the mix as it could be a tad higher. The double tracking could maybe do with the harmony's taken up a bit too esp the chorus and the Ahoo's and my last crit is that the ending has been cut too short. Overall and as a fan of your stuff, I love to listen to a good song and follow the wording, so if you could post them up .. ? Great song, you have such a wistful tone to your vocal it's almost haunting. ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 3, 2021 Author Share Posted January 3, 2021 7 hours ago, SupaReels said: Hi Kevin, I take the fact the bass line is a little low in the mix as it could be a tad higher. The double tracking could maybe do with the harmony's taken up a bit too esp the chorus and the Ahoo's and my last crit is that the ending has been cut too short. Overall and as a fan of your stuff, I love to listen to a good song and follow the wording, so if you could post them up .. ? Great song, you have such a wistful tone to your vocal it's almost haunting. ATB Steve Thank you for the kind words, Steve. I've added the lyrics as I wrote them before recording the song but there may be a few differences in the final version. I'm embarrassed that I let the cut-off at the end go out the door. Thank you for the feedback and the support! Compulsion - Kevin Walsh verse 1 a quiet compulsion rollin round in his head another day that makes her wish she was dead she don't mean nothing she drives him out of his head she don't know why but fine she says, still in his bed verse 2 she knows it's all in the eyes they say everything he gave her nothing she gave him everything a quiet compulsion rolling round in his head awake alone on the edge of her bed she don't mean nothing she drives him out of his head she don't know why but fine she says, still in his bed bridge (keep quiet) keep quiet now the slightest creak will give yourself away and then he'll know eyes in the back of his head will see you breaking the rules and that'll be all, yeah that'll be all she don't say nothing she drives him out of his head she don't know why but fine she says, still in his bed 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred's Gratis Scores Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 (edited) On 1/1/2021 at 9:02 AM, Kevin Walsh said: Thanks for your feedback! Are you talking about the short little instrumental bit at the very beginning? Yes, that's the part, but now listening to it again I'm not hearing it and the intro sounds fine to me. I'm not sure what was going on, maybe I was just having an off day? Sorry 'bout that. Edited January 3, 2021 by Fred's Gratis Scores Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 5, 2021 Author Share Posted January 5, 2021 I've posted a new mix taking into account all of your feedback. Please let me know if it hits the mark better. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 6, 2021 Share Posted January 6, 2021 And yet again @Kevin Walsh I find myself listening to one of your tunes when dear Missy got me out of bed at 04:20 am for some unknow reason, but today she did not want to go back to bed so I have been up since silly o'clock today. This does sound nice though 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 6, 2021 Author Share Posted January 6, 2021 11 hours ago, Wookiee said: And yet again @Kevin Walsh I find myself listening to one of your tunes when dear Missy got me out of bed at 04:20 am for some unknow reason, but today she did not want to go back to bed so I have been up since silly o'clock today. This does sound nice though Thank Missy for me, won't you? Thanks for listening, Wookie. I see you have a few new ones out there that I have yet to give a listen to. Something to look forward to! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted January 7, 2021 Share Posted January 7, 2021 Great Song! I guess i'm too much of an ingenue to know what the lyrics mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 7, 2021 Author Share Posted January 7, 2021 Thanks for listening, David! My sense of honor compels me to protect your status as an innocent so I will refrain from explaining the lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted January 7, 2021 Share Posted January 7, 2021 I think it sounds great, your done! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 8, 2021 Share Posted January 8, 2021 Kevin Sounds good and a good track this mix sounds pretty much there to me Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 8, 2021 Author Share Posted January 8, 2021 Thank you all, I'm calling this one finished. Whew. I appreciate your many listens of this track and your willingness to share your opinions! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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