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jack c.

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Wow, what an interesting song!  It's edgy, with a little Nine Inch Nails vibe thrown in for flavor.  Panning the vocal from center to side is cool and helps to change the mood of the song.  I'm kind of hoping that you have more planned for this because the intro lasts nearly a minute and a half, and just repeats the riff over and over.  An instrumental or guitar solo would help there.  Also, I'm missing a bass guitar or synth to put something in the lower register, which is pretty light, unless that's your intent.  All in all, this is quite a concept song, and I hope you don't mind my 2 cents worth.

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I wanted to leave as the intro was too long and repetitive...  but stayed in!
interesting use of vocal panning..  too much vocal tune for me though.

I don't want to take away from your composition...  but its not my genre or sound to listen too.
All the best with your music though.

 

Gary

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You've got the riff and the groove, but as many (most?) have mentioned the intro begins to drag on.
I feel the angst, you're getting that across.
Needs some work, but there's a "foundation" here to work from.

I do hope this is more exaggerated storytelling than purly autobiographical...

tom

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