Good song, a bass would help. imho, overall I think the instruments need to be clearer as there is too much muddiness and lack of distinctness of each instrument. I think it's an EQ issue that can be corrected easily.
Thanks! And I totally agree that the muddiness has gotten out of control. The problem is I've been picking at the song for literal years, using a hodgepodge of production strategies that don't really gel with each other. So it's just swamp. Maybe I'll try to strip off all EQ & effects just to make a totally raw mix, then I'll post back for EQ suggestions.
Hi - I do like this and agree it needs some bottom end
Whenever I have a track like you mention here (been around for a while and you've tinkered with it for a long time) I set them aside, then when I come back to them I normally strip right back and start again with fresh ears and probably new plugins or updated plugins!!
Cheeers
Nigel