Terry Carroll

This is great. I'm not a fan of this type of music, but I hear some progressive Rock in the keys and the guitar. Wish I had a band this good

Very good production. To me, and it may just me, but the vocal needs to sound a bit more spacy in parts of the song. It comes and goes.

Thank you Lynn

New mix with it was suggested, and it was a good suggestion it was a good suggestion.

My wife just told me the same thing. Thank you Jack!

This lyric has a personal meaning to me. It has a bit to do with a newspaper story that I read about.

This is good in every way. It's all there for a 80s glam song. Terry

Thank you for your kind thoughts. social observation song are my favorite songs to write. It helps me in some way Terry

It's not really a hidden meaning, It's just something that I was thinking about when I wrote it. Thank you for your kind thoughts. Every time I complete a song I try to bring up the drums a bit. I have had some success, looks like I have a way to go. Terry

Have a great day Tom

Well done guys! reminds me of Eric Clapton a bit the the verse.

Well done, the voice is so nice. Why is there any need for a robot to exist, when a human has a voice like this.

Thanks Lynn, your stuff always sounds top notch, so that means a lot to me

ing Bjorn! A lot of people say that lyrics don't matter. I'm not one of them. I don't think I'm very good with lyrics. I work hard to be better at lyrics every time I write a song, so it means a lot to me that you asked for the lyrics. . 120. He's The Perfect Guy Well he never checks out any other gal He only has eyes for you Never goes out drinking with his pals Always makes it home for things to do He's thankful for all you do each day Tells you so in all so many ways Brings you flowers when you least expect him to Those times you need them most, some how he knew Chorus He's the perfect guy He's Every woman's dream He's every thing a man can be He's the perfect guy He's Every woman's dream He's more man than you can even see Well there's nothing that he wouldn't do for you He's building a life to dream Leaving you no question dreams come true leaving you no doubt love's all it seems He's filling your heart with days of sun Fills both day and night with endless fun Makes you smile when things can be a bleeding drag Will not try to push when it's not your bag Repeat chorus Is everything in life so much better Some how he makes you feel so much greater

Thank you for listening Bjorn! A lot of people say that lyrics don't matter. I'm not one of them. I don't think I'm very good with lyrics. I work hard to be better at lyrics every time I write a song, so it means a lot to me that you asked for the lyrics. . 120. He's The Perfect Guy Well he never checks out any other gal He only has eyes for you Never goes out drinking with his pals Always makes it home for things to do He's thankful for all you do each day Tells you so in all so many ways Brings you flowers when you least expect him to Those times you need them most, some how he knew Chorus He's the perfect guy He's Every woman's dream He's every thing a man can be He's the perfect guy He's Every woman's dream He's more man than you can even see Well there's nothing that he wouldn't do for you He's building a life to dream Leaving you no question dreams come true leaving you no doubt love's all it seems He's filling your heart with days of sun Fills both day and night with endless fun Makes you smile when things can be a bleeding drag Will not try to push when it's not your bag Repeat chorus Is everything in life so much better Some how he makes you feel so much greater

The production and arrangement are strong, well done. Terry

Outstanding guitar work. I would have like some kind of voice in this. There's a good tune in this that I like..

This song is probably gonna come off as being very sarcastic. It very well may be a little bit, but it really has a deeper meaning in the lyric that is kind of hidden. I try to have any song I write to have something that means something to me. I tend to seem simple in my writing and be upfront, but I also have something in the lyric that could get by some people, but not all. I was feeling a little Kinks vibe coming to me as I was writing this. It may have something to do with the way I was singing a couple parts

Very well performed. I taken it you're using midi

Very well produced in every way.

Thank you Bjorn.

I had a friend ask me to write a tune and music to his lyric about two months ago. since I never did that kind of thing before, I wasn't too big on the idea at first. I played around with it til something clicked for me. I didn't change the lyric in the first verse much at all. there was a lot of changes in the rest of the lyrics that I had to make. It was an interesting experience. While I was writing the tune to the lyric, it seemed like I was feeling Neil Diemond ("Solitary Man"}, Meat Loaf (Two Out Of Three Ain't Bad), as well George Harrison at one point.

You're to nice. Thank you JW

Very well done. Did you use Cakewalk to complete this? Terry

I plan on sticking around. Seeing you on here helps me want too