daryl1968

Hi fabulous forum folks Here's a song written by Patty Lakamp and myself with some great guitar by James Griffiths. Nits and crits welcome. Lyrics below link TMI Written by Staypress and Patty Lakamp © Copyright 2020 Featuring james Griffiths on guitar V1 Why do people tell me All their private stuff? I’ve really had enough You had an operation? You know I’ll be discreet But I don’t need specifics When I’m trying to eat PreChorus No…Don’t say it Cuz I I Can’t take it Chorus Too much information Coming at my head Awkward situation Shoulda stayed in bed Too much information Why you over-share? Too much information Cuz I don’t care V2 You’re trying to fix your love life ...and I can understand But please don’t tell me Everything you’ve planned Glad you found a girlfriend Who’s really into you But spare me the detailed Post-game review PreChorus I never Tell you All the things I do Chorus Middle bit TMI TMI If you want to get personal, I’m not your guy TMI TMI If you think I’m kidding, look me in the eye PreChorus Believe it I mean it So keep it To yourself Chorus to end

Wonderfully edgy Mr Q. So much uncomfortable ear candy going on.

Well structured and performed mate. Beautiful sentiment John.

Love this Freddy - maximum quirk.

Nice song, performance and mix Keith. I agree with Tom above re the use of verb - very cool.

It was worth the wait - an excellent composition Dan. Cinematic

Brilliant Tom The melody running through the track is wonderful. Maybe the soft piano could come up a tad.

Thanks a lot Keith. Very kind of you

You need to get that looked at Thanks Dan. Hope you are well mate

thanks a lot Steve. I recently became vegan (true story) so I may not be quite as cheesy in future Thanks Max - I really appreciate it.

Thanks a lot ZincT - I also love the solo. Merry Christmas You're the best Kenny. Thanks mate and Merry Christmas The other half loved your comment Jesse - really appreciated. Merry Christmas mate Indeed

Absolutely re the Mrs! Thanks Congalocke - Merry Christmas Thanks so much Bob. I'll pass your regards onto James. Merry Christmas mate

Thanks so much Paul - Happy Christmas to you and yours

Ha. Thanks Lynn my mate. Thanks so much Old Joad

great stuff Bob - small nits already mentioned aside, I don't think you've lost those mix ears at all - sounds great mate. Merry Christmas

lovely Tom - really innocent feeling to vocal/arrangement etc. Is the song yours and is the playing you? The main post is a little unclear.

Brilliant Lasse - beautiful all round but the violin is the real star

Thanks so much - Merry Christmas Cheers Andy - very nice of you Thanks Doug - I'll tell the other half. Merry Christmas mate

another cracker Nigel - great video too

I like it Kakku. The style is a little different to what you normally post but it suits you.

nicely done Congalocke - cool fusion of the rock undertones and dreamy vocals and synths.

Thanks David - you made her day.

Thanks Makke. Merry Christmas to you too

Thanks Wookster me old mucker

Great stuff Lynn. Really nice vocals and use of synths. Guitar is great but that's a given. Mix sounds good to me - plenty of room for everything.