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New video "Lost on the Breeze"

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Very nice song! Beautiful arrangement, good work man.

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This is so very well crafted; so big 👍's.

Caused some "introspection" here, and I suspect will for most who listen.

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so this is where I intrude and offer what I hope will be taken as constructive crits.
Meter, to me, is just as important as melody and lyric.
so some suggestions you should take with a grain of salt...

"and go on our own way"
"You, were from an age when you couldn’t say"

if I was producing, these are some minor changes, I think, would make the lyric "flow" a bit better.
As I said above "very well crafted", so again, take it with a grain of salt...

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Pleasant track easy on the ears even with the lyric content.

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