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Hi chaps well this ones been on the back burner for some time , so I made some (many)changes and heres what came out , itS  another  rant about , politics and media etc all comments are welcome cheers P.. .......the end will faded out at some stage....

 

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wonderful huge sound.drums need quantizing.voice and harmony need tuning.really nice chord changes.jack c.

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Yeah, Paul, those drums need some work and they need to be up in the mix too!  Some good changes in this and your voice is really good -- phrasing and tone.  Some very nice guitar lines and such particularly in the instrumental section -- lots of creativity-- another good one 😉 -- Allan.  

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Good song. Definitely some timing issues though. Do some audio transients so see how far off things are.

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Hi Paul . . . this grimsby thing is turning into a really great tune ! I think it would be time well spent tweaking this mix, because this is a good one. The lead vocals and political attitude lyrics really work for me, and the guitar solo in the middle really caught my attention, also the instrumental part right after that with the bass guitar high end melody . . . has something special. You have such a great feel for the background harmony vocals, oohs and aahs here really work well.

Overall mix wise I'm hearing mostly that the bottom end needs boosting . . . yes everything's clear, because of that, but so missing that low eighties punch you want.

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preach it.  truth will never be a commodity and information is always in  formation.  I like how this song goes through several phases.  It feels like a complete experience that way.  Like Bruce said, the bass can be a little more pronounced.   Great song.

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I'll echo all of the above.

t

What's your overall level on the mix, seems a bit light, had to turn it up quite a bit...
Not that that's a bad thing...

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52 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said:

I'll echo all of the above.

t

What's your overall level on the mix, seems a bit light, had to turn it up quite a bit...
Not that that's a bad thing...

Yeah Hi t , Ive left myself a bit of headroom on this one before I master, this is the first time I`ve managed to do this as usually I push it all to the max leaving nowhere to go later on so i´m really experimenting with this one , the drums are all seperate, and many tracks  are using  lots of busses giving me easyer  control at the mix stage ....well thats the idea anyway ..or failing that I`ll just have a few beers and push record ......cheers P

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Great job on the lyrics and vocals ! I thought the lead breaks and guitar tones were awesome.   Really impressive song.  mark

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