Leizer 78 Posted November 24, 2021 Hi there! I'm no lyricist, but I wanted to do a song (it has been 5 years since I wrote a song with lyrics) so I reached out to Daryl who I collaborated with several years ago playing violin. He accepted and it has been a real blast. He also was a great guidance in the mixing process. Thanks! My Dog Written by Staypress (lyrics) & Lasse Williamsson (music) Staypress - vocals and background vocals Lasse Williamsson - the rest While apart I thought about your face, nothing can replace, left an empty space Days and nights would never be the same, my life would be so plain without you You give me love, unconditional love You chase a ball and bark at the postman I take you walks, in all the parks And give you my food under the table Your the one that brightens up my days, in so many ways, clears my malaise When you look at me and wag your tail, my life would be so stale without you I sometimes don't feel worthy of the way you look at me The way you greet me when I open the door, Is a sight to see 3 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larry T. 234 Posted November 24, 2021 Hi Leizer....very nice late '60's style pop song you created there, your dog must be very happy 🐕 .... nice mix, production, playing....pretty cool 👍🐶🎼🥁 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bapu 4,857 Posted November 24, 2021 Wonderful, simply wonderful. 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
steve@baselines.com 275 Posted November 24, 2021 Pretty much nothing can beat the joy a dog can give you unconditionally. Nice song! 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted November 25, 2021 If my dog had a voice, it would sound just like Daryl. The hook will bring you back! Nice one, enjoyed it. 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KSband 308 Posted November 25, 2021 Cute song, I liked the violin break. Don't know if you have heard Scott Henderson's Dog Party album, it was all dog themed rock/blues with some pretty funny lyrics (he's an epic guitar player too) 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 1,005 Posted November 26, 2021 Love it! Made my toes start tapping and put a smile on my face. -Bjorn 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 875 Posted November 26, 2021 Brilliant.. 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 875 Posted November 26, 2021 Cant get the "you give me" Chorus out of my head... lol.. find myself singing it over and over. Great sixties vibe. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mark skinner 647 Posted November 26, 2021 Perfect production from the beginning to the end ! My pit bull "Sukie" is leaning on me and also enjoyed it .. mark 2 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhonoBrainer 1,817 Posted November 26, 2021 Whatever the next Disney movie is about dogs, this should be in it. Your chord changes with that awesome melody, just terrific old-school pop writing. The modulation was clever, and straight into an instrumental retelling of the hook - great idea there. And the mix was very hi-fido. Great collab, great vocals, great talents that should be more widely appreciated! 1 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
antler 1,293 Posted November 28, 2021 Really great song - good vibe and well mixed. Love the instrumental break in the middle too! 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Michael Fogarty 67 Posted November 30, 2021 friendly song, upbeat, wholesome, and fun. Great arrangement. 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,747 Posted December 1, 2021 On 11/24/2021 at 8:54 PM, Leizer said: And give you my food under the table That is your dishwasher pre wash Leizer an sensible dog owner knows this, it is also very green saving on water like that. Daryl at his usual lyrical best, the music and playing were cool too.. Mix sounded fine here on the Event's 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daryl1968 442 Posted December 1, 2021 1 hour ago, Wookiee said: That is your dishwasher pre wash Leizer an sensible dog owner knows this, it is also very green saving on water like that. lol Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,732 Posted December 1, 2021 Much enjoyed here! t 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daryl1968 442 Posted December 6, 2021 Thanks for asking me to join you on this one Lasse. Thoroughly enjoyed it 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lynn Wilson 642 Posted December 6, 2021 This is very touching! There's not nearly enough good songs about dogs (or other pets). A+ 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AndyB01 339 Posted December 7, 2021 Creative genius at its finest - no more to be said. Andy 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 597 Posted December 8, 2021 "Friendly ..., upbeat, wholesome and fun" indeed. This is a wonderful melodic popish song. Production and performance sound great! As one who enjoyed the "love" of two dog and lost them both, I can certainly relate to the lyrics. This was a listening treat! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites