Eternity

[RexRed 69]

Here is my new song, "Eternity".

I hope you like it Cakewalk peeps. 

[Wookiee 1,029]

Nice, but if I was mixing this, would just take the vocal back down into the mix just a tad, it is good but the vocal feels/sounds little to forward and detached from the rest of the backing.

This is obviously just the furry opinion of a furry alien from a galaxy far far far away.  I did enjoy as is though.

[jack c. 182]

another great recording job and song.jack c.

[RexRed 69]

Hey Wookie, I use my big 15 inch Kustom speakers to assess and bring the vocal into the mix and yesterday the transformer/amp circuit board in one of them fried. My studio room was filled with noxious toxic smoke. I just had them on and I was not even driving them with a signal. I am looking into replacing the parts so I had to guess the vocal to mix ratio through my headphones which does not work in my experience. I will revisit the song at some point.  Thanks Jack for the compliment, glad you like it! 👍😉  I thought the vocal was a bit hot and up front but it is in the ballpark I think. 

[David Sprouse 457]

You're stepping out of the country vein here.  Nice for a change.  I listened on consumer stereo and it sounded really good.  

[RexRed 69]

Wow! Thank you David for testing this out on your speakers, very nice to hear this tune held up!

[noynekker 176]

RexRed . . . total respect for this one. the vocal talent really shines through on this one, again . . . you keep cranking out such great songs ! Ultimate love song, hope she appreciates it. On my headphones I hear a bit of over sibilance in a few places, but it never sounds too brash, nothing serious, and doesn't take away from the delivery of the song. I only say this to help in your mix . . . because this one really deserves to be "perfect"

[RexRed 69]

Thanks for the comment Noynekker, Yes, it is a bit brash in places. I am thinking of adding harmonies and cranking down the vocal volume in a few places to make it fit into the music a bit better. It sort of passes the way it is but could use some very slight tweaks.  

[Marc Cormier 428]

Every one of your songs I've listened to has been a great experience.  You've got a great voice.  Doubling the guitar with synths was a super nice touch; I'm not listening with headphones so a bit harder to detect any harshness in higher ranges but even if they're there, it's a fine piece.  I was really hoping the synth would help ride the song out and I wasn't disappointed!

[RexRed 69]

Thanks Marc for the compliments on my songs and voice. Glad you like them! Super you like the synth arpeggio riding the song out too!  👍😉✨ 

Edited March 6 by RexRed

[Wookiee 1,029]

On 3/3/2021 at 8:50 PM, RexRed said:

transformer/amp circuit board in one of them fried.

Ouch, sounds like it could be expensive.

[Bajan Blue 547]

Great vocals again - i really like your voice

Good track

Nigel

 

[Andrew Rhodes 12]

Quality! What a voice!

[KurtS 115]

Another nice song and very smooth vocals. The  sibilance is the only problem I hear, maybe the bass is a little low.

[michaelhanson 60]

Very nice vocal!  Just a tad hot for me, it could sit down in the mix just a bit.  Also just slightly more reverb than I prefer, but that is a personal preference.  

[Lynn Wilson 496]

Superb song, Rex!  All I hear is a great voice and haunting melody that stands on its own.  One of your great talents is versatility, and it really shows on this tune.  I listened to this song 3 times in a row, so I guess I like it as is.