garybrun 595 Posted January 23 Well done Bill. Don't be shy and bring up the volume a little on that bongo in the Right hand speaker? we all paint different pictures... that's how I would paint mine, 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurt soderquist 99 Posted January 23 I think it would sound nice with some melody over the whole track. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 117 Posted January 23 nice job recording and chords.maybe a sax or guitar playing a melody.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bill Campbell 9 Posted January 24 18 hours ago, garybrun said: Well done Bill. Don't be shy and bring up the volume a little on that bongo in the Right hand speaker? we all paint different pictures... that's how I would paint mine, Agreed the sound stage could use a little work. Lately thinking too much like a musician and not enough like an engineer. 😉 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
emeraldsoul 1,158 Posted January 24 Look what you done and started! It's a cool vibe for sure and I appreciate your clean guitar chording and tone. The bass part was super supportive, yet maybe a bit "roomy" in the mix? I agree it's wanting a lead instrument of some kind, at some point. Did you knock down the fingersqueaks? Is so, you might let a little more back in? It would likely give you even more air in your already-pretty-cool guitar tone. good one! cheers, -Tom 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 864 Posted January 25 Short and sweet! I kind of see it as a cue. VO on the front and then out as the organ comes in... t 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 479 Posted January 25 nicely played and good tune but as others have said dying out for some melody or vocals perhaps Good stuff Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
