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Wasted Years - with Daryl on backing vocals

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On 9/1/2020 at 10:01 AM, garybrun said:

took 38 years to get this one done

Anything worth doing, is worth doing right!
I think (and it seems the forum agrees) you can print it now...

Beautiful, that's all I have to say...

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Thoughts as I listen - just my opinions...

  • Beautiful song, full of heart and feeling
  • Wonderful rich quality to the lead vocal.
  • My pref would be to sink the vocal down just a tiny bit in the mix - it really jumped out in front to me on my Sony headphones
  • Like the bass harmony on the chorus. Rich, soulful, I like how it steps up and down, complementing the melody
  • "Lying in my bed one DAY?" That jumped out at me. You're in bed in the middle of the day?
  • "Worship - by the door" - a pause after 'worship' would have made that line balance better with the one before
  • Recommend fading a little slower after the last 'Thank you' - it seemed a bit abrupt.
  • Really well done! Beautiful stuff!

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@Barry Seymour thanks so much for the listen and the feedback.
Thats what Im looking for...  brilliant  🙂

sometimes I do sleep a lot...  one day does not equal middle of the day... well maybe after a good session on the wine.!!

Worship by the door=  worship and adore... so need to fix that 🙂
 

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