DeeringAmps 623 Posted September 9 On 9/1/2020 at 10:01 AM, garybrun said: took 38 years to get this one done Anything worth doing, is worth doing right! I think (and it seems the forum agrees) you can print it now... Beautiful, that's all I have to say... t 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Barry Seymour 69 Posted September 10 Thoughts as I listen - just my opinions... Beautiful song, full of heart and feeling Wonderful rich quality to the lead vocal. My pref would be to sink the vocal down just a tiny bit in the mix - it really jumped out in front to me on my Sony headphones Like the bass harmony on the chorus. Rich, soulful, I like how it steps up and down, complementing the melody "Lying in my bed one DAY?" That jumped out at me. You're in bed in the middle of the day? "Worship - by the door" - a pause after 'worship' would have made that line balance better with the one before Recommend fading a little slower after the last 'Thank you' - it seemed a bit abrupt. Really well done! Beautiful stuff! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 427 Posted September 10 @Barry Seymour thanks so much for the listen and the feedback. Thats what Im looking for... brilliant 🙂 sometimes I do sleep a lot... one day does not equal middle of the day... well maybe after a good session on the wine.!! Worship by the door= worship and adore... so need to fix that 🙂 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
