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Mesmerized
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Hey, you've nailed that indie jam-band style down pat -- grooves right along. Mix and such were good -- this is a terrific demo for your song. Best wishes~~~~Allan
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Very soulful sound -- mix and arrangement is terrific -- really like the pad of voice harmonies (though I thought he might be better placed in the mix). Vocal was also very nice (Morrissey vibe?).
Good wishes~~~~~Allan
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Dad's Song
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You've really got that vibe down pat with this one -- vox and such are right in the pocket. And...dare I say this...I found the guitar break to be kinda beautiful -- well thought out, very well played with ringing resonant tones. And yes, I did bob my head while listening. Good one, mate!
~Allan
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The thing(s) that made the Dan so incredibly great is that Fagen & Becker could write commercially catchy songs that were often bedded in intricate jazz arrangements. A tough thing to do of course. While your music doesn't rise to the level of the Dan (whose does?) it certainly does aim high in that regard. And for that I say Bravo!
~Allan
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3 new Songs
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Very nicely done -- those guitar and bass tones are super duper. My favorite was the third piece -- it flows beautifully and the arrangement/mix are top notch. Man, that piece is screaming for some vocals on it -- it would be great.
~Allan
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I listened to the first song -- it's a good demo but needs some work on the mix and arrangement. I liked the chorus melody (more harmonies!) and the lyric. The recording needs more definition -- all the parts are there. Wishing you the best -- Allan
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Tone, chops, depth of feeling...anything I forgot?
~Allan
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Funk Cello
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Your recording and mix is very good. I also like your guitar playing -- terrific tone. I enjoyed listening to this -- very well done. ~Allan
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Hey, terrific demo -- mix is good and everything is well performed. I think the vocals could be spread a bit in the chorus. I enjoyed this as it has an 80s feel to it -- the only nit I have was having to look at Che. ~Allan
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Hey Freddy -- love the sound on that harmonica -- very nice. I like the dryness of the guitar -- a funky sound that would be washed if it had more reverb. There's a slight syncopation glitch between the guitar and the vocal -- the timing of your vocal delivery sounds just a little off to me from the get-go. But it's surely another terrific demo from you. I enjoyed it. ~ Allan
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On 3/30/2019 at 11:14 AM, amiller said:
Nicely done. I really like the strong melody and vocals.👏
Thanks much -- Allan
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Snappy tune and a terrific demo -- Allan
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On 3/25/2019 at 7:47 PM, Jesse Screed said:
yes
a masterpece
abull, i had a dream about you
thanks for the experience
right it
write it
in your opinion, what matters?
imknotworthy
Write on Jesse.
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On 3/24/2019 at 6:30 PM, freddy j said:
What a great tune!!! The melody really pulls one in to the song and your vocal performance is excellent, as are the BGV's.
Excellent song Allan!
Thanks Freddy glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting -- Allan
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On 3/24/2019 at 9:23 AM, Douglas Kirby said:
That was a catchy tune - I liked it. That lead guitar tone was unusual, and it worked well. The chorus was a good hook. The mix sounded good to me.
Good lead vocal and bgvs - sounded cool to me.
Hey Douglas, glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting -- Allan
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I particularly like the music and arrangement in this ambitious piece, John. Very creative. -- Allan
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Hey Bob, another cooker from you -- the mix is great. The instruments have the perfect amount of punch and kick and your vocal is terrific. You're a master of this genre for sure. I'm looking forward to hearing your next song -- Allan
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Another cool song Freddy -- I enjoyed this and as always, I look forward to hearing your next one -- Allan
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On 3/1/2019 at 1:33 PM, soundregion said:Nice mix and nice vocals. The bassline sounds a bit off in my ears, but maybe it's not supposed to sound "traditional"?
Hey, thanks for listening and commenting -- Allan
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On 2/28/2019 at 6:47 PM, garybrun said:Nice vocals.
You should be proud of your song.Hey, thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated. -- Allan
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