ABull

Hey, this is a terrific demo of your song -- the mix is great -- I like your reverb choices a lot.  Another good from one you I'd say.~~Allan

This is a good demo of your song -- clear mix and the arrangement is interesting -- solid work.

~~Allan

Hey Freddy --another cool song and terrific demo -- really enjoyed this~~Allan

Hey Freddy -- sorry for the delay (see what I did there?) in listening to this -- as usual, clever song-wise and mix-wise -- you don't take the easy way out  -- looking for different angles.  I like that.  ~~Allan

Hey Kenny, while the track itself could be funkier (think Sugarfoot),  your playing as usual was very good -- I enjoyed your tones and the jazzy lines you constructed.  ~~Allan

On 9/3/2019 at 2:33 PM, Douglas Kirby said:

It's a cool tune - I enjoyed the listen and I liked the arrangement. Your voice made me think of Morrissey a bit.

The mix sounded solid to me - Nice job.

Thanks, mate -- much appreciated.

On 8/31/2019 at 2:09 PM, Old Joad said:

Timely message. kind of has a Elvis Costello vibe which I really like. good job😎

Much thanks.

On 8/28/2019 at 9:10 AM, amiller said:

Another cool tune.  I really like the lyrics.

Thank you -- I'm glad those lyrics resonated with you.

~~Allan

Hey, your vox sounds a little like Liam Gallagher - nice.  You need to do some work on this demo but it's a good start you've got here.  I'd like to hear a future version of it.

~~Allan

Hey, I've been there done that on those recorders.  You did terrific work on this demo -- I like the bass sound of that synth in particular -- just the right tone.  Everything sits well in the mix.  Vocal sounds good and well recorded.  The acoustic guitars are a little bright but so what.  You were making good home studio demos 30 years ago -- I'm impressed.

~~Allan

Very nice sounds -- some hints of Santana's Caravanserai in this piece.

~~Allan

I can't get the hang of Windows 13 -- just accidentally hit the bump button on my keyboard -- sincere apologies.

most assuredly...

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Hey Freddy, I like that chooglin' beat - an early 60s toe tapper fo sho.  Cool use of those drum fills too -- bass could use a tad more compression I think.  Another good one in the Freddy canon -- see what I did there? --

~~Allan

Man, I know -- and dread -- those feelings so you had me from the get-go.  However, the song really picked up interest for me from 3:25 onward.  Some very nice stuff going on there -- in fact, you could turn some of those chord changes and such into a song with vocals.  It would work well, I think.  

~~Allan

I always find a lot to like in your instrumentals and this is no exception.   The transition in sound from the dense sounding intro to the sparser verse is very nice -- my nit is that the "harmonica" sound is a bit stodgy.  A different synth sound would give it more umph.  As usual, I think your tracks would make a good basis for some 80s style pop tunes but that doesn't seem to be your direction.  So, keep 'em comin'...

~~Allan

Hey Freddy -- another very well done blues numba from you -- I can dig it.

~~Allan

Terrific demo of your song -- I enjoyed listening!

~Allan

7-4-2019

Hey fellas -- thanks for listening and posting comments  -- much appreciated.

~~Allan

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On 5/31/2019 at 2:43 PM, kakku said:

Very catchy which is a sign of a good song

Much thanks mate, but we know that's not always the case, right?

On 5/31/2019 at 2:13 PM, freddy j said:

Hi Allan.  This is a really well put together song.  It has an excellent pop feel to it.  It has a bit of contrast with a bit of a cheery melody with what could be sad lyrics.  BTW the lyrics are great!

Nice one!

Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song esp. the lyrics mate.

On 5/31/2019 at 6:16 AM, thegaltieribrothers said:

Hi ABull,

Nice play on words and hook with a quirky song to boot.

Well performed, thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

Thanks mate.

Hey mates -- thanks for all the listens and comments.