kloon

This is great! The vocals drown a little bit in the arrangement, i would personally prefer it louder.

The instrument that comes in after the chorus is a bit loud and a little bit sour at times.

Other than that, it's great!

A lovely tune with nice little melodies Bjorn.  Sounds like it would fit quite nice to some nature shots in Scotland.

I find it a little bit dry in the mix, a little bit more reverb and stereo width would probably be good.

Nice little melodies, experimental and a bit weird. I like it!

7 minutes ago, 53mph said:

Very nice! Top notch production. Really first class.

What is the effect on the vocals?  A subltle vocoder?  

I'm guessing that this is already out there as a single. So you can't go back to it, right?

Thank you very much for your kinds words!

No fx other than Waves Cla Vocals on the vocals.

Yes, it's already out but i welcome all feedback for future songs.

5 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

The song has a really nice atmosphere to it.
I kept expecting something to fill in the pauses but you have a bit of a minimalist approach going in the song, which I think works well.

I wanted another clue to what Mary's plan was since there's some ominous stuff  going on, but I think you intended for the listener to make up a story for themselves.

Thank you very much Bjorn for listening and your kind words!

Yeah, thats pretty much my songwriting in a nutshell. I very seldom reveal the main plot i plain words. It's always up to the listener. Personally, i find that kind of songwriting more interesting.

Great song and nice arrangement. The vocals are great but could be mixed a little bit more "in your face" in my book.

Agree with James on the hi-hat, other than that it sounds great.

Bring on the vocals!

1 hour ago, Douglas Kirby said:

I really liked this one - especially your lead vocal.  The mix sounds good with plenty of depth to it. Very cool way to end it - nicely done.

Thank you very much Douglas! Nice to get a comment on the ending as well.

Great track James! 

Another great one!

Good strong lyrics, they really kept me interested the whole song!

Wow, this was great. The arrangement has a nice Depeche Mode feel to it.

Enjoyed it alot! And btw, my real name is John.

Very nice indeed. Your voices work very well together. Good work!

Thank you very much InstrEd & SPAK, appreciate it alot!

Thank you very much Tom for listening, your kind words and good solid feedback.

2 hours ago, James G said:

Beautiful production, as always. Nice song too.

Thank you very much James!

5 hours ago, David Sprouse said:

I read the lyrics before I heard the song, I totally got the vibe wrong.  I was waiting for you to go up an octave with that beautiful voice of yours!.  Always so professional KLOON!

Thank you very much David!

Hope you like it!

Mary Has a Plan for Tonight

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Lyrics:

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Mary has a plan for tonight
She's gonna let out the demon inside
She will take you for the ride of you life
Better hold on tight
Oh Mary has a plan for tonight
You've got nowhere to run or hide
She will take you to the highest of highs
Better hold on tight

She's here for a good time
Not a long time
A party for one
She's a loaded gun
She's here for a good time
Not a long time
In the midnight sun
She's a loaded gun

Mary has a plan for tonight
Like an angel all dressed in white
You've waited for this moment all your life
Better hold on tight, Better hold on tight  
Oh Mary has a plan for tonight
You'll think everything's alright
But the love she gave could never be saved
For the morning light

She's here for a good time
Not a long time
A party for one
She's a loaded gun
She's here for a good time
Not a long time
In the midnight sun
She's a loaded gun
She's here for a good time
Not a long time
A party for one
She's a loaded gun
She's here for a good time
Not a long time
In the midnight sun
She's a loaded gun