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  1. 4 hours ago, Fred's Gratis Scores said:

    Love the smooth synth textures. Reminds me of something Moby-ish.

    The only comment I would have is that there seemed to be a jump in volume at 3:02 that pulled me out of the groove for just a moment.

    Nice job!

    Thank you very much Fred for your kind words and feedback.

    That jump in both intensity and volume around the 3 minute mark is very much intentional from my part.

  2. 1 hour ago, David Sprouse said:

    Whatever it is, it's not worth selling your soul!  :D:D  I was expecting a happy song;   But you do write about that desperate feeling very well,  musically and lyrically.

    Hehe, yeah i guess the title is a tiny bit missleading. ;) Thank you very much for listening and your kind words! :)

  3. 3 hours ago, Bajan Blue said:

    Really good stuff and a definite Ultravox type vibe - I love all the vocals, they really are excellent. Good open mix as well

    First Class

    Nigel

     

    Thank you very much for your kind words Nigel. :)

  4. 5 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

    Your song hit the happy button in my brain, just what I needed.
    The lyrics maybe weren't intended that way but the overall sound just came together to set that mood.
    Very well done.

    Thank you very much bjorn! Alway happy when my songs touch people in any way. :)

  5. New song out today, hope you like it. :)

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    my number came up today
    i'm lost in every way
    and there's so much i need to explain
    as i slowly go insane

    will you meet me at the gates
    i did all i could
    but all too late
    and now im starting to lose control
    will you catch me when i fall

    my number came up today
    i'm exile from my happy place
    and just because i smile doesn't mean im ok
    i guess I've been waiting for today

    take me back to my happy place   
    i fade away
    oh i fade away
    bring me back to happier days
    i fade away
    oh i slowly fade away

    if i tear down the lies
    if i open my eyes
    if i stay on my knees
    if i break down and cry
    if i promise you gold
    if i beg for my life
    if i fall in line
    then all will be fine

    if i tear down the lies
    if i open my eyes
    if i stay on my knees
    if i break down and cry
    if i promise you gold
    if i beg for my life
    if i fall in line
    then all will be fine
    if i suffer in pain
    if i scream out your name
    if i sell my soul
    if i live in shame
    if i fight for you
    if i fall at your feet
    will you come for me
    will you come for me

    Spotify Link:

    https://open.spotify.com/album/5hReGw1Mg7fr8GjFnGXQxo?si=raa3E8vESLy2oqGxjJzFlg

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