kloon Posted December 15, 2019 Author Share Posted December 15, 2019 4 hours ago, SPAK said: Right up there .. I get Toms obs and your take on the beat, for me it all works although I would have loved a M8, say lead guitar, but it's a small crit .. I do love your stuff as you know, probably 'cause of your lyrics with great mixing ... so all good here, thanks for the post ? Steve Where was the inspiration for the lyrics ..? Just love to know Thank you very much Steve for your kind words and support. The inspiration for the lyrics is this growing group of men in society and online that seem to be lost, not really know their place in life. No purpose, very bitter and often lonely. He could be dangerous, like a ticking bomb. But he doesnt have to be, its all up to the listener. 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 15, 2019 Author Share Posted December 15, 2019 2 hours ago, David Sprouse said: True to your style on this one I always love hearing your new songs. The switch between talking about anger and then loving a girl was a little abrupt (sort of a non sequitur) Dont really think it's an important detail, though. Thank you very much David! I absolutely get what you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 15, 2019 Author Share Posted December 15, 2019 2 hours ago, Lynn said: Wow, this has a very modern pop sound combined with a vintage vibe that draws you in. On headphones the mix is well panned, and the vocal sounds quite big, and on speakers, it fills the room. I like this very much, and I think it stands on its own, as is. Merry Christmas to you, too. Thank you very much Lynn for your kind words, glad you like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted December 15, 2019 Share Posted December 15, 2019 5 hours ago, kloon said: Thank you very much Steve for your kind words and support. The inspiration for the lyrics is this growing group of men in society and online that seem to be lost, not really know their place in life. No purpose, very bitter and often lonely. He could be dangerous, like a ticking bomb. But he doesnt have to be, its all up to the listener. Thanks for that ..I will hear it in a more understanding way now, for me it's kind of important with work like this ... Thanks again for your time ? Steve 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted December 16, 2019 Share Posted December 16, 2019 Nice job kloon - this song sounds radio ready to me - get it to the right people? Good mix and a well arranged song - I liked your lead vox on this. I agree with emeraldsoul - maybe the drums could use a bit more variation - but that's a small crit. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 17, 2019 Author Share Posted December 17, 2019 7 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said: Nice job kloon - this song sounds radio ready to me - get it to the right people? Good mix and a well arranged song - I liked your lead vox on this. I agree with emeraldsoul - maybe the drums could use a bit more variation - but that's a small crit. Thank you very much Douglas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted December 17, 2019 Share Posted December 17, 2019 Excellent song and mix. I concur with others on the harmony part. If they were up more this song would sound so much bigger...epic even,.?? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 18, 2019 Author Share Posted December 18, 2019 10 hours ago, amiller said: Excellent song and mix. I concur with others on the harmony part. If they were up more this song would sound so much bigger...epic even,.?? Thank you very much, and i will take the feedback with for future songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jude77 Posted December 18, 2019 Share Posted December 18, 2019 You're getting a ton of accolades and rightly so!! This is really a killer track with pro-level arranging and playing. And the fact you sing so well is just icing on the cake. Remember us here on the forum when you make it big! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
congalocke Posted December 18, 2019 Share Posted December 18, 2019 (edited) What a fun intro. Love that arpeggio part, (what instrument/vst is that?) and it all sounds great. I'm with garybrun in that I hear it as a bigger song in my head, (Maybe adding a bunch of instruments during the chorus?) It has the feel of a sunrise/new horizon like Where theStreets Have No Name. And it felt like it ended to quick. Keep up the good work. Edited December 18, 2019 by congalocke 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 19, 2019 Author Share Posted December 19, 2019 23 hours ago, jude77 said: You're getting a ton of accolades and rightly so!! This is really a killer track with pro-level arranging and playing. And the fact you sing so well is just icing on the cake. Remember us here on the forum when you make it big! Hey Jude, thank you! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 19, 2019 Author Share Posted December 19, 2019 4 hours ago, congalocke said: What a fun intro. Love that arpeggio part, (what instrument/vst is that?) and it all sounds great. I'm with garybrun in that I hear it as a bigger song in my head, (Maybe adding a bunch of instruments during the chorus?) It has the feel of a sunrise/new horizon like Where theStreets Have No Name. And it felt like it ended to quick. Keep up the good work. Thank you very much for your feedback and kind words. The first sound (absolute beginning) is Zebra 2, and the bassline is VPS Avenger. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 23, 2019 Author Share Posted December 23, 2019 First post updated with an acustic version as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted January 1, 2020 Share Posted January 1, 2020 (edited) On 12/23/2019 at 12:12 PM, kloon said: First post updated with an acoustic version as well! Really enjoyed the acoustic version too but I think the plugged original just shades it for me. Sounds even better on a subsequent listen - teriffic song - really great work. Andy Edited January 1, 2020 by AndyB01 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted January 2, 2020 Author Share Posted January 2, 2020 8 hours ago, AndyB01 said: Really enjoyed the acoustic version too but I think the plugged original just shades it for me. Sounds even better on a subsequent listen - teriffic song - really great work. Andy Thank you very much Andy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 2, 2020 Share Posted January 2, 2020 @kloon Nice, cool stuff. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted January 2, 2020 Author Share Posted January 2, 2020 2 hours ago, Wookiee said: @kloon Nice, cool stuff. Thank you Wookiee! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted January 3, 2020 Share Posted January 3, 2020 Hi Kloon, Electro-angst, I love it - reminds me of the Proclaimers in a strange way. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted January 3, 2020 Author Share Posted January 3, 2020 4 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said: Hi Kloon, Electro-angst, I love it - reminds me of the Proclaimers in a strange way. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Hehe, "Electro-angst" love that term. Glad you liked the song Paul, will have to check out The Proclaimers. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted January 12, 2020 Share Posted January 12, 2020 I love the production, the drum breaks, a really wide sound , yep it`s all there , cheers PB 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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