kloon Posted December 10, 2019 Share Posted December 10, 2019 (edited) New Kloon song out now, for those of you interested in following my stuff. Thanks for listening and merry christmas. Spotify url if anyone wants to ad it to their playlist. https://open.spotify.com/track/68LXSIiLTiyAzQsYRLJTXz Acustic version: https://www.dropbox.com/s/x7rrbaq3owfuzeg/This Is Your Life - acoustic.wav Edited December 23, 2019 by kloon 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 10, 2019 Share Posted December 10, 2019 Very nice. Splendid even 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 10, 2019 Author Share Posted December 10, 2019 1 hour ago, kakku said: Very nice. Splendid even Thank you very much kakku for listening and your kind words. ♥️ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted December 10, 2019 Share Posted December 10, 2019 Hmm - I like - lovely guitar riff. The lyrics really drew me in - very dark stuff and great story telling - I get the feeling it doesn't end well and I'm glad you leave that out there. Terrific stuff. Andy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted December 11, 2019 Share Posted December 11, 2019 Hey Kloon, this is a terrific demo of your song -- good mix and arrangement -- instruments and vox are well placed. If you revisit the mix -- it seems to me that there's a lack of sparkle in the choruses -- for instance, the harmonies could be louder in the mix -- it could sound "bigger" or something. Good work~~Allan 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted December 11, 2019 Share Posted December 11, 2019 Interesting tune! I like it. The vocals I think are especially well mixed. Do I hear a delay of the main vocal fading out into the right speaker? Whatever your lead processing is, super great. Very clear lead vocal. I might ask for just a bit more variety in the drum programming but it's a bit of an 80's throwback maybe? A couple of 80's electronic tom fills would sit nicely alongside that 2-and-4 80's snare, in the back half of the tune. What a niggle. Great mix on a very cool song. cheers, -Tom 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 11, 2019 Author Share Posted December 11, 2019 (edited) 7 hours ago, Andrew Ball said: Hmm - I like - lovely guitar riff. The lyrics really drew me in - very dark stuff and great story telling - I get the feeling it doesn't end well and I'm glad you leave that out there. Terrific stuff. Andy Thank you very much Andrew, yea i prefer to leave much of the story up to the listeners imagination and not say everything out loud. Edited December 11, 2019 by kloon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 11, 2019 Author Share Posted December 11, 2019 2 hours ago, ABull said: Hey Kloon, this is a terrific demo of your song -- good mix and arrangement -- instruments and vox are well placed. If you revisit the mix -- it seems to me that there's a lack of sparkle in the choruses -- for instance, the harmonies could be louder in the mix -- it could sound "bigger" or something. Good work~~Allan Thank you very much for your feedback and kind words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 11, 2019 Author Share Posted December 11, 2019 definitely 40 minutes ago, emeraldsoul said: Interesting tune! I like it. The vocals I think are especially well mixed. Do I hear a delay of the main vocal fading out into the right speaker? Whatever your lead processing is, super great. Very clear lead vocal. I might ask for just a bit more variety in the drum programming but it's a bit of an 80's throwback maybe? A couple of 80's electronic tom fills would sit nicely alongside that 2-and-4 80's snare, in the back half of the tune. What a niggle. Great mix on a very cool song. cheers, -Tom Thank you very much Tom. Yes, there is definately a little bit of delay going on on the vocals. The drums are maybe a bitt simple in arrangement but that is kinda how i like them. Not the biggest fan of toms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy Posted December 12, 2019 Share Posted December 12, 2019 Melody of Peace. Very good 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 12, 2019 Author Share Posted December 12, 2019 3 hours ago, Jimmy said: Melody of Peace. Very good Thank you very much Jimmy, Melody of Peace sounds nice. ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted December 12, 2019 Share Posted December 12, 2019 Nice track and well mixed on the vocals. Would like to hear more of the harmonies. In my head I believe this track could sound bigger. Great song and great demo. Well done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 12, 2019 Author Share Posted December 12, 2019 2 hours ago, garybrun said: Nice track and well mixed on the vocals. Would like to hear more of the harmonies. In my head I believe this track could sound bigger. Great song and great demo. Well done. Thank you very much Gary for both your feedback and kind words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted December 12, 2019 Share Posted December 12, 2019 A little U2 feel here? Unless what I think are "jangling" guitars down in the mix is a synth. On 12/10/2019 at 7:42 PM, kloon said: The drums are maybe a bitt simple in arrangement but that is kinda how i like them. Not the biggest fan of toms. I was going to agree with emeraldsoul on the drums, but hey; your song, your production. I do agree on the vocal processing, well done! Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 13, 2019 Author Share Posted December 13, 2019 Thank you very much Tom! Yes, they are guitars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 14, 2019 Share Posted December 14, 2019 Yeah I don't know what the lyrics mean, but that's okay! I made up my own story. Impressive voc track. Whatever you did there, it was just right. Song arrangement is excellent. Big thumbs up! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kloon Posted December 14, 2019 Author Share Posted December 14, 2019 1 hour ago, bjornpdx said: Yeah I don't know what the lyrics mean, but that's okay! I made up my own story. Impressive voc track. Whatever you did there, it was just right. Song arrangement is excellent. Big thumbs up! Thank you very much Bjorn. Yeah my lyrics are always very vague on purpose, this one is no exception. The whole point being as you said for the listener to make up their own story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted December 14, 2019 Share Posted December 14, 2019 (edited) Right up there .. I get Toms obs and your take on the beat, for me it all works although I would have loved a M8, say lead guitar, but it's a small crit .. I do love your stuff as you know, probably 'cause of your lyrics with great mixing ... so all good here, thanks for the post ? Steve Where was the inspiration for the lyrics ..? Just love to know Edited December 14, 2019 by SPAK 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted December 15, 2019 Share Posted December 15, 2019 (edited) True to your style on this one I always love hearing your new songs. The switch between talking about anger and then loving a girl was a little abrupt (sort of a non sequitur) Dont really think it's an important detail, though. Edited December 15, 2019 by David Sprouse 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted December 15, 2019 Share Posted December 15, 2019 Wow, this has a very modern pop sound combined with a vintage vibe that draws you in. On headphones the mix is well panned, and the vocal sounds quite big, and on speakers, it fills the room. I like this very much, and I think it stands on its own, as is. Merry Christmas to you, too. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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