kakku Posted December 1, 2019 Share Posted December 1, 2019 (edited) Hi. This time my tune is a bit strange because the chorus sounds a bit like it should be a bit different to suit the verse. It might be that you think otherwise so please listen and comment if you want. Here is the later version ttps://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/flowing-going-on Edited December 1, 2019 by kakku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted December 1, 2019 Share Posted December 1, 2019 Yes, The parts with tempo and arrangement (drums and bass) changes makes this sounds a bit like two different songs in my opinion. . Otherwise the melodylines and sounds are pleasant. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 1, 2019 Author Share Posted December 1, 2019 (edited) On 12/1/2019 at 6:00 PM, Makke said: Yes, The parts with tempo and arrangement (drums and bass) changes makes this sounds a bit like two different songs in my opinion. . Otherwise the melodylines and sounds are pleasant. Expand Thanks for the comment. I tried to fix this earlier but was not sure which version is better. In case you or other listeners have time I post my fix attempt here: Edited December 1, 2019 by kakku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted December 1, 2019 Share Posted December 1, 2019 On this later version tempo changes works . The parts are more uniform and sounds like one song. Nice dynamic & arrangement/orchestration changes between the parts. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 1, 2019 Author Share Posted December 1, 2019 On 12/1/2019 at 7:20 PM, Makke said: On this later version tempo changes works . The parts are more uniform and sounds like one song. Nice dynamic & arrangement/orchestration changes between the parts. Expand Thanks a lot for your analysis and comments. I agree that the later version sounds less buggy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted December 1, 2019 Share Posted December 1, 2019 unique assemblage of sounds at the beginning...the tempo changes do sound disconcerting at some points, but if this were at a club...the dancers would like the breaks. Nice one! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 1, 2019 Author Share Posted December 1, 2019 On 12/1/2019 at 8:57 PM, David Sprouse said: unique assemblage of sounds at the beginning...the tempo changes do sound disconcerting at some points, but if this were at a club...the dancers would like the breaks. Nice one! Expand Thanks for the analysis and comment. The tempo changes are maybe too big Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 Kakku Nice dance tune but it still sounds like two different songs to me. Maybe that's the effect you want? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 On 12/2/2019 at 2:19 AM, bjornpdx said: Kakku Nice dance tune but it still sounds like two different songs to me. Maybe that's the effect you want? Expand I tried to make it one package. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G Randy Brown Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 I really like the A section...nice textures, sounds cinematic. I agree with others regarding the tempo change...have you tried slowing it down to the same as the A section. It might not sound like Dance music anymore but it might be interesting and lead you in a different direction (ie soundtrack music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 I have not tried with different tempos. It might work. Perhaps I will try it later when I have found all the computer parts. Thanks for the comment and tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 Yep, almost sounds like two songs, however, I really like that. We all have moments of switching from topic to another...like - “I want to do this but wait, I also want to do this.”?? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 On 12/2/2019 at 4:35 PM, amiller said: Yep, almost sounds like two songs, however, I really like that. We all have moments of switching from topic to another...like - “I want to do this but wait, I also want to do this.”?? Expand Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted December 3, 2019 Share Posted December 3, 2019 I think some work on the segue to make the transition less abrupt. No concrete suggestions unfortunately, but I do think that’s how I would approach it. Not my genre, but you held my interest to the end. Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 3, 2019 Author Share Posted December 3, 2019 On 12/3/2019 at 4:35 PM, DeeringAmps said: I think some work on the segue to make the transition less abrupt. No concrete suggestions unfortunately, but I do think that’s how I would approach it. Not my genre, but you held my interest to the end. Tom Expand Thanks. Maybe I will return to this when I get my daw back in order Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted December 3, 2019 Share Posted December 3, 2019 Kakku, I think this is a very fine work! I've heard EDM juxtapositions that are way crazy, and this song isn't crazy at all. I do like the second version better, but I could dance to either version (if I could dance). The only thing I will suggest is to clip that hum at the very end of this song, otherwise, I think this is on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 3, 2019 Author Share Posted December 3, 2019 On 12/3/2019 at 7:10 PM, Lynn said: Kakku, I think this is a very fine work! I've heard EDM juxtapositions that are way crazy, and this song isn't crazy at all. I do like the second version better, but I could dance to either version (if I could dance). The only thing I will suggest is to clip that hum at the very end of this song, otherwise, I think this is on the way. Expand Nice to hear this. Thank you also for the improvement suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckebaby Posted December 3, 2019 Share Posted December 3, 2019 Man that chorus that kicks in at 0:45 is rockin ! The tempo changes are a bit drastic but they fit/musically together very nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckebaby Posted December 3, 2019 Share Posted December 3, 2019 took a second listen, man this song is just waiting for vocals. Not really my style (im more into hard rock and metal) but wow, the lyric vocal arrangement potential is threw the roof. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 4, 2019 Share Posted December 4, 2019 Listening to the first post version jumps a re a little to dramatic for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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