Keith Wilby Posted July 5 Share Posted July 5 https://www.bandlab.com/post/40db7dd2-7e59-f011-8dc9-6045bd38076d Major changes to the lyrics to embody the title a bit better. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T Boog Posted July 5 Share Posted July 5 Nice job Keith. I esp like the guitar tone. It's fat & warm. And the vocal harmonies are cool too. PS. Don't worry... The guitar hook sounds nothing like My Woman From Tokyo 😄 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted July 5 Author Share Posted July 5 1 hour ago, T Boog said: The guitar hook sounds nothing like My Woman From Tokyo Ah crap it does doesn't it? It even starts with a chattering hi-hat. In my defence, I'd never heard it before but I hate it when it happens. Thanks for the heads up. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T Boog Posted July 5 Share Posted July 5 24 minutes ago, Keith Wilby said: Ah crap it does doesn't it? Cheers Keith. I wasn't gonna say anything but it's even in the same key 😄 No worries though, it's still a good song and a good performance. If it were me, Id just change up that guitar hook a little bit. Just moving the phrasing around a bit or adding in a couple diff notes would do the trick. But def don't throw the baby out with the bath water. Again, it's a cool song 👍 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted July 7 Share Posted July 7 Hi Keith , I don’t know any women from Tokyo , so its all new to me loved all the vocals, and the guitar tones were spot on great production cheers P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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