ABull Posted November 21, 2019 Share Posted November 21, 2019 (edited) A Edited December 18, 2019 by ABull 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted November 21, 2019 Share Posted November 21, 2019 Cool song - the arrangement works well. I thought the BGVs stood out as a good part of this song. I liked your lead vocal - Chris Isaac came to mind for me - not the same, but it made me think of him. The mix overall sounded good to me - thanks for posting. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted November 22, 2019 Share Posted November 22, 2019 The harmony parts are indeed very good. Liked the way you brought it in on the second line of the second verse. For me, and I don’t know why, The Association came to mind. Blast from the past, eh? Well developed story line, good piece of songwriting, nicely done overall. Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted November 22, 2019 Share Posted November 22, 2019 Nice song. I liked the melodic tune and arrangement. Good vocals and sounds. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted November 22, 2019 Share Posted November 22, 2019 Very good, likeable song 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted November 23, 2019 Share Posted November 23, 2019 Great tune. The vocals are top notch. ?John B 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted November 23, 2019 Share Posted November 23, 2019 This took me back to that early 1960's style. This number has a great melodic feel and you vocals are excellent and really bring out the sentiments of the lyrics. Excellent stuff Allan....1 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted November 25, 2019 Share Posted November 25, 2019 Actually, the first thing I thought of was The Beach Boys. Very nice.? 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted November 26, 2019 Author Share Posted November 26, 2019 On 11/21/2019 at 3:31 PM, Douglas Kirby said: Cool song - the arrangement works well. I thought the BGVs stood out as a good part of this song. I liked your lead vocal - Chris Isaac came to mind for me - not the same, but it made me think of him. The mix overall sounded good to me - thanks for posting. Hey Douglas, thanks for the kind comments mate -- I'm glad you like my demo.~~Allan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted November 28, 2019 Author Share Posted November 28, 2019 On 11/22/2019 at 12:53 AM, DeeringAmps said: The harmony parts are indeed very good. Liked the way you brought it in on the second line of the second verse. For me, and I don’t know why, The Association came to mind. Blast from the past, eh? Well developed story line, good piece of songwriting, nicely done overall. Tom Hey Tom, I'm pleased that the song resonated with you--thanks for your comments~~Allan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted November 29, 2019 Author Share Posted November 29, 2019 On 11/22/2019 at 9:50 AM, macce said: Nice song. I liked the melodic tune and arrangement. Good vocals and sounds. Hey macce, thanks for listening & commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted December 4, 2019 Author Share Posted December 4, 2019 On 11/24/2019 at 7:56 PM, amiller said: Actually, the first thing I thought of was The Beach Boys. Very nice.? Thank you, mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
congalocke Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 Nice job. I liked the melody going from verse to chorus as it catches me as well as the Styx-ish keyboard playing at 1:53-ish... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kennywtelejazz Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 Hi Allan , This song sounds professional in all the areas where it counts. Well written , nice mix, good playing I liked your vocals and vocal delivery a lot ...Good sound , phrasing and dynamics .. all the best , Kenny 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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