TAKEN AWAY - Original

[marcos69]

This is a redo featuring my new vocalist Joey Perez.  Comments welcomed and encouraged.  Thanks.

 

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Edited June 24 by marcos69

[treesha]

Enjoyed it. Love the guitar. Good song, lyrics and mood. I think the vocalist has a good voice, but I'm not sure the way it is processed is enhancing it. Not sure what to say about that, just maybe less fx and more natural/dry in there ? I expect there are some good rich intonations in his voice that I would like to hear. I just think his voice could be presented better.  Just my 2 cents!

[marcos69]

1 hour ago, treesha said:

Enjoyed it. Love the guitar. Good song, lyrics and mood. I think the vocalist has a good voice, but I'm not sure the way it is processed is enhancing it. Not sure what to say about that, just maybe less fx and more natural/dry in there ? I expect there are some good rich intonations in his voice that I would like to hear. I just think his voice could be presented better.  Just my 2 cents!

Treesha, thank you so much for the review.  I'm with you on the vocals but the singer is insisting on wet verb...a very 70's guy.  Part of it is the dismal subject matter - the lyrics reflect what is going on in a troubled mind that isn't at peace.  Thanks again.