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[ABull]

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Edited June 25 by ABull

[Paul Bush]

Hi Allan, I always really like your lyric`s and songs,  great hook ``Mr together is coming apart ´´ ... I hate make comparisons but it`s got that Ray Davis (Kinks) feel to it which just super,...... proper songwriting, a proper song , properly done  , cheers paul 

[Bajan Blue]

Hi Allan

Really like this and the lyrics are cool

Great Stuff

Nigel

 

[treesha]

Great tune, quite cheery for the subject matter ha. The mix sounds good. Enjoyed it.

ps I couldnt possibly do any song of any sort without melodyne, its an amazing creative tool in addition to fixing things

Edited June 10 by treesha
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[ABull]

On 6/5/2025 at 6:59 AM, Paul Bush said:

Hi Allan, I always really like your lyric`s and songs,  great hook ``Mr together is coming apart ´´ ... I hate make comparisons but it`s got that Ray Davis (Kinks) feel to it which just super,...... proper songwriting, a proper song , properly done  , cheers paul 

Thanks Paul. I appreciate your comments mate and yeah Kinks is a-okay with me   -- Allan.

[SUPAREELS]

Have to agree with Paul Bush   Nice to hear home grown stuff ..Well done!

Steve (SRM)