americana "One Small Step"

[Barry Seymour]

Here's a new one. Let me know what you think, especially in mixing, as I'm just getting started on that.

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15019978

 

[treesha]

Very well done. Good story telling and the music goes very well with your convincing lyrics. The mix sounds as it should be but I have an air conditioner blaring too so fwiw. Enjoyed it.

[garybrun]

Very nice Barry.
I have always liked your vocals and story telling.

We all paint different pictures..  I beleive the drums could need some work.
The snare sounds very monotonous  and could be varied on the sample.
I cant really hear the kick.. in fact total drum volume needs and increase.
The break with the guitar solo need to be increased a by a few db.
A few vocal pitch corrections.

The accoustic sounds great and I love the panning.
Bass in nice and warm.
 

Well done Barry.

[Barry Seymour]

12 hours ago, garybrun said:

Very nice Barry.
I have always liked your vocals and story telling.

We all paint different pictures..  I beleive the drums could need some work.
The snare sounds very monotonous  and could be varied on the sample.
I cant really hear the kick.. in fact total drum volume needs and increase.
The break with the guitar solo need to be increased a by a few db.
A few vocal pitch corrections.

The accoustic sounds great and I love the panning.
Bass in nice and warm.
 

Well done Barry.

Great feedback for my tired ears, thanks for this.