Paul Bush Posted May 9 Posted May 9 Hi people , here´s a new one a ``Life and soul of the Party´´ these things can go sadly wrong sometimes , that car trip home can be deafening in it`s silence .. Well your sparkling eyes hide, those tell tale signs that´s inside Informing me its time to find our coats, make excuses and go Was I borìsh ? I thought I was more`ìsh The Life and soul, The way they gathered around me hanging on every word chorus Was I dancing on the ceiling , just super apealing Standing out from the crowd , Was´nt I delectable, was`nt I deliriouse, Down right Dandy, and hilarious , Well you`re squeezing my hand real tight, as you refuse the traffic lights The sinking feeling that alls not right,sobers me up in the (was too serious ) pale moonlight... Did I get seriouse I thought I was mysterious oblivirous Were my jokes too raw did I hit another nerve , hanging on every word chorus Bridge Stop this room from spinning around all over me flashbacks and blackouts.... shadowing me......... Ive played this scene before like a film in slow motion Stop it now and let me sleep........... Well I wake up but my minds still a maze, I remember dancing a brand new craze, the music stopped and everybody stared, I fell down and thats when I fell from grace , Was I insulting, was I embarrassing Were my jokes too raw did I hit another nerve , chorus and outro 5
Bajan Blue Posted May 10 Posted May 10 Hi Paul I really like this - a well written track, very nicely played and mixed - enjoyed it a lot reminded me in a strange but very good way of a Nick Lowe / Brinsley Schwarz track - great stuff Cool stuff Nigel 1
treesha Posted May 11 Posted May 11 This is interesting, it has a few other eras vibes to it put together nicely like a quilt. Sounds great, enjoyed it, and brought back memories... 1
steve@baselines.com Posted May 14 Posted May 14 Hi Paul - nice fun song I like it. I would make the drums drive it forward with another more direct pattern, but even so, it is a good listen. Enjoyed it. 1
ABull Posted May 16 Posted May 16 Hey Paul, everything is boffo on this except the drums on the verses seem a tad off kilter. I like those chord changes on the chorus a lot and the bass is terrific -- enjoyed the listen -- Allan. 1
noynekker Posted May 21 Posted May 21 Another great song Paul . . . some excellent vocals, as always . . . was waiting for the sprawling guitar solo, but you kept this one on the story of the lyric. Yes, I really like the story and the very real feeling of it, as it unfolded . . . top notch songwriting ! 1
Paul Bush Posted May 23 Author Posted May 23 Thanks to all that commented greatly appreciated , this one was a long hard struggle from the writing stage all the way through just one of those things , no sooner had I posted this one the next song shot out from the dark and was by and large written in a couple of hours (not recorded) so its been a joy to see the next come together so easily (sorry Noynekker no solo in this one either) once again cheers to all Paul 1
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