Bad Blood (Gary Brun master)

[mark skinner]

Hello , I recently finished building a cigarbox style lap steel. This is my first attempt at playing and recording it.  I'm pretty slow with it and not used to using a slide. Hopefully some trickier stuff will come later..  

Regardless of how you feel about the lyrics , feedback and suggestions for improvement would be nice .

 I'm getting pretty fed up ..

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14974880

 

Edited 1 hour ago by mark skinner

[garybrun]

When you wrote before you working on a slide guitar I was looking forward to hearing it.
It sounds great.

I am sure you will master this..  why are you getting fed up?
Hang in there pal.

[hsmusic]

Keep up the work if you can, it fits & complements your music nicely.

[treesha]

I enjoyed the song and think it works well! So I dont have any suggestions, just encouraging you to keep at it. 

[Larry T.]

Sounds great. You've got the slide guitar groove happening perfectly through out the song.  Vox sound great.  Great work. Enjoyed very much 🎶 🎵

[Marshall]

I’m not knowledgeable enough in the nuances of lap steel playing. All I know is that to my ears this sounds like a terrific song, and well played.

[Mr No Name]

great song, reminds me of driving a big american car down a big empty freeway,  A feedback or suggestion would be to change the fade out at the end, its a bit linear and long. Listening to the rest of your songs as we speak, very nice stuff.