timboalogo Posted February 12 Share Posted February 12 Had a bit of fun with this song where the devil bargains with a young man who has an unusual request. Sorry about the lead guitar, my fingers are getting old and fumbly. And it's me on the rest of the synths and bass. There are some swear words, so beware. i waited for the father at the backdoor to the club five knuckle shuffle in my future, time for some Brandi Love red eyeball swimmin in the peephole, like somethin from another song door opened and there he stood in his technicolour raincoat flashing me with a great big smile he stood there flashing me he glowed like a big *****in meteor, the heat was stingin my eyes smelled like some kinda Mount Vesuvius in his chintzy Halloween disguise his voice boomed like the mother of all bombs, his hooves tap tap tapping on the floor he said, folks call me Satan round here, what the hell can i do for you boy (for you, son) what can i do for you boy didn't know if i should sit on his lap but i threw caution to the wind listened politely to my request gave me a two fingered salute full of sin (as above, so below) forked tongue licked jagger lips and he brought life back into my dead fish in the matter of payment, he laughed, i think this one's yeah this one's on the house yeah this one's on the house when i snuck back into my bedroom, i dropped Gilligan into his tank the water boiled like chemistry class and his little friends slowly sank thoughts of Brandi Love disappeared, and i swear i heard the devil laugh in the matter of payment, he chuckled, yeah this one, this one's in the tank yeah this one's in the tank 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted February 13 Share Posted February 13 Very creative, unexpected stuff here and there, sounds really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted February 13 Share Posted February 13 Really like this - sounds great cool track Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted February 13 Author Share Posted February 13 Thanks you two! Believe it or not, I worked with ChatGPT on an early and incomplete version of the story and lyrics. It suggested I try something different from the usual "trade your soul in a deal with the devil" trope. I didn't use it to write any of the lyrics, they just kind of came to me, but for lasering in on the story line. The only "lyric" that I did let it write was to name the fish Gilligan. Timbo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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