SteenE Posted February 5 Share Posted February 5 Hi It's been a while since I posted here, but I remember it was a good place to get feedback from other aspiring artist. I'm planning on releasing this soon and I wonder what you think. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted February 5 Share Posted February 5 I love word guys .. good work ... the mix is a little cold but your vox kinda compliments the song overall ( in a good way ) . Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted February 5 Share Posted February 5 I like it. Nice development. Good instrumentation. Maybe make the chorus a little bigger somehow. Some higher pitched synth there or strings in the background, a little louder? It has a similar dynamic throughout which is not a bad thing to me, but I think it could be more interesting with some dynamic changes. Enjoyed it 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteenE Posted February 6 Author Share Posted February 6 16 hours ago, treesha said: I like it. Nice development. Good instrumentation. Maybe make the chorus a little bigger somehow. Some higher pitched synth there or strings in the background, a little louder? It has a similar dynamic throughout which is not a bad thing to me, but I think it could be more interesting with some dynamic changes. Enjoyed it Hi Treesha Thanks for you input. I'm uploaded a revision on Soundcloud. I hope it's better. Add a little to the chorus. Not to much. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted February 6 Share Posted February 6 Hi Sounds good but do agree with Treesha, re some different synths perhaps otherwise all good Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted February 6 Share Posted February 6 8 hours ago, SteenE said: Hi Treesha Thanks for you input. I'm uploaded a revision on Soundcloud. I hope it's better. Add a little to the chorus. Not to much. Yeah the revision does have slightly more dynamics changes so I like this version better. If you want to play with it some more, like Nigel said, add some different synths for variety here and there. But, it has a simplicity to it that works with your voice and lyrics and the style of the song so I think this is what you are going for. Its a good song. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted February 7 Share Posted February 7 I really like the lyrics. It would be cool to add some backing vocals. Is this a true story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted February 7 Share Posted February 7 I like the lyrics. You're expressing your feelings and they're coming across very well. Pretty catchy melody too that's staying with me after listening. The song might need a bit more variation but on the whole it's very well done. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteenE Posted February 8 Author Share Posted February 8 17 hours ago, Jesse Screed said: I really like the lyrics. It would be cool to add some backing vocals. Is this a true story? Yeah, my whole album may be lacking background vocal. I gave it a try on another song, but weren't happy. The "watch out" etc bit in the chorus might work. I'll try it I guess you can say it's my story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross Smithe Posted February 8 Share Posted February 8 Very nice tune, like your vocals! Agree with others a bit more variety dynamically might be good, but this does seem to fit the lyrics well. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteenE Posted February 9 Author Share Posted February 9 This a my final result. I've changed a litlle in the drums and a little BG vocals in the chorus. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted February 9 Share Posted February 9 I did not hear the original post but I like the video. I also like the way that you currently set up. To me the song has a very wistful and contemplative feel to it. The lyrics, vocal and instrumentation (being not in your face -- but ---well -- laid back and wistful) all contribute very well to the overall feel! Nice one! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted February 10 Share Posted February 10 Each step you took made it better, good work! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted February 10 Share Posted February 10 Great Production ! I really didn't miss the harmony that I was wanting to hear while watching the video. I really enjoyed it .. ms 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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