Draft song: "two points on a line"

[Smashing Galaxy]

Hi all,

Hope you are all enjoying the start to 2025.

Critique requested for a new song I've been working on. It's called "two points on a line". A little love song. Feedback welcome on all aspects from performance to production. Cheers and happy new years.

 

 

[jack c.]

well done.jack c.

[KSband]

Nice song and arrangement.

[Bajan Blue]

A nice song, well arranged, played and mixed

Cool

Nigel