Untitled Experimental track, WIP looking for feedback

[Amberwolf]

Still in early stages of composition and creation, using primarily sample libraries from GhostHack, Black Octopus Sound, and Image Sounds, as well as stuff I already had, and stuff I had made myself, as well as Z3TA2+ synth, and various effects.  

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14881842

 

Looking for detailed / helpful critiques of any part of the track, technical, musical, or otherwise.   Give it to me straight.

 

Stuff I already know about that I'm working on:  There's too much going on in several places, and some of the transitions are pretty abrupt.   It has a LOT of work still to go, but I have a direction to go in, at least.  I expect it will end up at least twice as long as it is now with the interludes and intro stuff I haven't built and played yet.  Many of the samples in the libraries need trimming / chopping up / key changing in various ways to create the melodies and harmonies I'm after (I already did some of this for certain sections, but there's a lot yet to go).  The percussion I still have to build transitions and "thinner" sections of to clear out some sections where there's too much going on.  

 But any feedback about those is also still welcome. 

 

I wish the libraries had a "lyrics" translation for the non-English vocals.  I love the sound of them but it would be nice to know what they mean.   (one of them has translations for the Elvish parts, but nothing for the real languages). 

 

 

 

[Amberwolf]

Updated version:   https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14881894

[Mr No Name]

That's actually very good imo, nice track.

I wouldn't mess about too much more with it, sounds great,

one thing I would say, there is a small bit at the beginning and a bit at the end where the high end sounds a bit too saturated. couple of bars worth.

as for the music,  top tune.

[lɐʍd]

do like, reminds me of transglobal underground/loop guru, in the second/updated version i find the brushy percussion a bit harsh, and maybe generally a bit more space between instruments/loops

good job sir