noynekker Posted November 4 Share Posted November 4 Hi folks . . . Here's another new one I've been mixing for the last while . . . some more on my familiar theme about my ugly long commute, who knew it would be such inspiration for songwriting ? Let me know how it translates, on your systems, and your brains . . . Bruce 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted November 5 Share Posted November 5 Hi Bruce I like this, and love the lyrics! only minor comment is the mix sounds just a little muddy - I think it might be the drums that sound a bit muffled? Apart from that pretty minor comment, love the track and your vocals are excellent cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaps Posted November 5 Share Posted November 5 I think the lead guitar was buried in the mix. What I heard sounded pretty good so crank that puppy up and let it shine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted November 6 Author Share Posted November 6 21 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Hi Bruce I like this, and love the lyrics! only minor comment is the mix sounds just a little muddy - I think it might be the drums that sound a bit muffled? Apart from that pretty minor comment, love the track and your vocals are excellent cool Nigel @Bajan Blue That's a very helpful mix comment Nigel, so I'm still working the mix idea . . . I wrote it, then mixed it too many different ways, probably got lost along the way, hope to fix it soon, thanks for your valuable input ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted November 6 Author Share Posted November 6 21 hours ago, Chaps said: I think the lead guitar was buried in the mix. What I heard sounded pretty good so crank that puppy up and let it shine. @Chaps Thank you, I have had some other comments about that lead guitar volume level, will try to fix that . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted November 7 Share Posted November 7 Great lyrics. Really like bringing in the wife and daughter as a reminder why you're doing what you're doing. To me the vocal part just needs to come forward a bit. Other than that very good song. Enjoyed it. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted November 7 Share Posted November 7 Mix sounds fine, but I have to confess not a fan of repeated one or two word lyrics, The "Rabbit proof" hole just got to much. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted November 7 Share Posted November 7 (edited) Lots of good suggestions above. Love the tune. Lather, rinse, and repeat the mix, we’ll have another listen… t as usual, SC and my iPhone don’t play nice so I couldn’t comment at SC. Edited November 7 by DeeringAmps 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted November 8 Author Share Posted November 8 19 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Great lyrics. Really like bringing in the wife and daughter as a reminder why you're doing what you're doing. To me the vocal part just needs to come forward a bit. Other than that very good song. Enjoyed it. -Bjorn Thanks so much Bjorn, Lyrics may be the best thing, until I fix the mix . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted November 8 Author Share Posted November 8 12 hours ago, Wookiee said: Mix sounds fine, but I have to confess not a fan of repeated one or two word lyrics, The "Rabbit proof" hole just got to much. Wookiee . . . sorry you don't like it, I'll endeavor to do better next time., but I'll be happy you think the mix is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted November 8 Author Share Posted November 8 9 hours ago, DeeringAmps said: Lots of good suggestions above. Love the tune. Lather, rinse, and repeat the mix, we’ll have another listen… t as usual, SC and my iPhone don’t play nice so I couldn’t comment at SC. Hi Tom . . . think I've got some mix help on the way, glad you had a listen, and like the song idea . . . yes, some good suggestions above to help make it better. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted November 8 Share Posted November 8 5 hours ago, noynekker said: Wookiee . . . sorry you don't like it, I'll endeavor to do better next time., but I'll be happy you think the mix is fine. It is not that I don't like the song, just not a fan of the use of repeatedly repeating the same one or two words. So much "modern" music seems to rely on repeating the same one, two or three word phrase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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