Terry Carroll Posted September 11 Share Posted September 11 I wrote the song "You Don't Want to Be Her" with a workaholic in mind. From what I've observed in business, workaholics almost always find success. I also imagined what Ray Davies from The Kinks might say, as I've always admired his quirky and insightful lyrics. https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/terrycarroll/you-dont-want-to-be-her-rm1 Cheers, Terry Carroll 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted September 11 Share Posted September 11 Very hot! found it tricky to really hear it properly sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted September 11 Share Posted September 11 very english sounding.well done.jack c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry Carroll Posted September 11 Author Share Posted September 11 Thank you Jack. Brought up on British Pop/Rock, Have a great one! Terry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerrydf Posted September 12 Share Posted September 12 Yes, good - probably more like Robyn Hytchcock than Ray Davies in delivery? Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted September 14 Share Posted September 14 Hi Terry I listened on Youtube and it sounded OK - liked the track a lot Good vocals and and song with interesting lyrics Cool Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted September 14 Share Posted September 14 Cool song, very upbeat, sixties with good lyrics and a good vocal performance, which is indeed, at least to my ear, very reminiscent of Ray Davies. Nice one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry Carroll Posted September 19 Author Share Posted September 19 On 9/14/2024 at 8:25 AM, Kevin Walsh said: Cool song, very upbeat, sixties with good lyrics and a good vocal performance, which is indeed, at least to my ear, very reminiscent of Ray Davies. Nice one! I was thinking along the lines of "Dedicated Follower of Fashion" as I was writing the lyric. I mean in the vein of not a love song, and something that no one would ever write about. Whoever wrote about a work a workaholic woman that gave up a normal life for a career, even though it happens all the time now days. Thank you for listening and sharing your thoughts with me! Terry 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted September 20 Share Posted September 20 Very good indeed! Good instrumental performance and vocal performance. Not being familiar with Robyn Hytchcock, I would have to say given the topic of your wonderful lyrics and the general style of the music --- it does kind of remind me of Ray Davies. I enjoyed it very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted September 25 Share Posted September 25 (edited) Cool song, the lyrics kind of remind me of Mothers Little Helper.👍🏼 BTW I left my comments on your YOUTUBE channel. Edited September 25 by Old Joad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry Carroll Posted October 1 Author Share Posted October 1 On 9/25/2024 at 12:23 PM, Old Joad said: Cool song, the lyrics kind of remind me of Mothers Little Helper.👍🏼 BTW I left my comments on your YOUTUBE channel. Thank you for listening!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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