A Dollar More Than What I Got

[Wayne Severson]

 

Edited August 22, 2024 by Wayne Severson
Updated the link with a video

[Wayne Severson]

I just put this together over the last few days.  I still have a few things to add and or replace including some vocal lines.

Feel free to tear it apart or offer any input.  

 

[jack c.]

nice.fine job.jack c

[Wayne Severson]

Thanks Jack

[equality]

First, it sounds like a traditional 12 bar blues. But it's interesting what you do in the guitar solo sections where the tune goes to minor chords. I like that and also that the performance sounds live. 

[Old Joad]

I like the bare sound of it, nice job👍🏼

[Wayne Severson]

Thank you, I've been adding some backup vocals, hope to not clutter it up any.

The solo is semi live I guess,  I noodled with some ideas to get started, then improvised until things went south.

punched in to get me to the end and punched in that last lick over the 5 chord.  It's a journey to the dark side of the dumpster.

I'll add the new mix when I can.

[mark skinner]

  Wayne , Very cool and Creative song. I totally agree with @equality  about the break. Very unusual but worked Great in this song. It kind of invoked a sense of confususion and mood swing . I thought the backing guitar tones were Steller and very well played.  

If I was mixing this , I think I would experiment a little more with the vocal FX  😁

Looking forward to the next version.       mark

[Wayne Severson]

Version 2       https://on.soundcloud.com/VbRk5ZnNry6dnXUx6

The solo certainly takes you down a different path,  thanks for the comments on the guitars

New Vocal, added Backing Vocals and a touch of slide in verse 3, new mix of course

[Bajan Blue]

Hi

As others have said, creative and nicely done

enjoyed the listen

Cool

Nigel

 

[Wayne Severson]

Thank you NIgel.   I updated the original link with a video, just had to do it lol