equality Posted May 12 Share Posted May 12 (edited) Another singer-song-writer item. Any suggestion for improvement most wellcome! Edited May 12 by equality 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted May 15 Share Posted May 15 Pleasant song with the beautyful melody. Enjoyable vocs and guitar solo. Great job. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted May 16 Share Posted May 16 hey billy joel.well done.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted May 16 Share Posted May 16 I like the way it is so can't think of anything to improve the song, Nicely done the way you started the song simply then gradually added on the layers. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 17 Share Posted May 17 Loved the piano , really my type of song that Iike to listen to , great strings , super arrangement , the only glitch for me was the lyrics were just a tick to many words , i suffer from the same problem I start off with too much to say and try and squeeze it all in and then have to dumb it down , its tiresome but it has to be done , still a dam fine song ...cheers P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted May 19 Author Share Posted May 19 On 5/15/2024 at 7:35 PM, Makke said: Pleasant song with the beautyful melody. Enjoyable vocs and guitar solo. Great job. Many thanks for encouraging comments! Most appreciated. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted May 19 Author Share Posted May 19 On 5/16/2024 at 6:23 PM, jack c. said: hey billy joel.well done.jack c Love B J. Thank you jack c! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted May 22 Author Share Posted May 22 On 5/17/2024 at 1:12 AM, bjornpdx said: I like the way it is so can't think of anything to improve the song, Nicely done the way you started the song simply then gradually added on the layers. -Bjorn Thank you so much for your comments Bjorn! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted May 22 Author Share Posted May 22 On 5/17/2024 at 9:04 PM, Paul Bush said: Loved the piano , really my type of song that Iike to listen to , great strings , super arrangement , the only glitch for me was the lyrics were just a tick to many words , i suffer from the same problem I start off with too much to say and try and squeeze it all in and then have to dumb it down , its tiresome but it has to be done , still a dam fine song ...cheers P Spot on Paul! Thanks! Too many words. Perhaps I should slow the song down a bit and do the vocals again but it's hell of a work. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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