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Working 11 to 7

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at the quick mart

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I seen everything

Until tonight

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She walked in

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and went to the candy side

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And got some chips

 

Oooh

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She walked around the aisles

And she came to see me at the counter

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She couldn’t pay money

She couldn’t pay money

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I did not know what to do

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So I let her go this time

I let her go this time

I let her go this time

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Ah ah ah

Ooh ohh

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Sfors[fol[weg

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Drops on the ball

Wasn’t quite sure what she meant

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But then she showed me

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Working 11 to 7 at the quickety mart you see everything

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11 hours ago, Wookiee said:

WIth some of your stuff Jesse I get a Captain Beefheart  vibe in your lyric. Mix works I can hear all the musical and nonmusical FX.  :) 

All thoughts are welcome and I am so thankful for you taking the time to comment.

Personally, I think that Kaptajn Beefheart  sounds like me, a little bit, moistly though he do him I do me.

 

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11 hours ago, Wookiee said:

I can hear all the musical and nonmusical FX. 

Hey Wookiee, I hope you don;t think this is rude.  Could you lease give me some time positions of the nonmusical parts?

I only ask because I like to have a balance of musical and non musical

So my mixes and arrangements are better.

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14 hours ago, Wookiee said:

some of your stuff Jesse I get a Captain Beefheart  vibe

I’m guilty of suggesting that in the past. But I think Jesse is right

3 hours ago, Jesse Screed said:

moistly though he do him I do me.

Moistly yes. 

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8 hours ago, Jesse Screed said:

Hey Wookiee, I hope you don;t think this is rude.  Could you lease give me some time positions of the nonmusical parts?

I only ask because I like to have a balance of musical and non musical

So my mixes and arrangements are better.

Oh there was music all the way through, the non-musical parts where the FX.

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Hi you,

Well this has GOT to be your best work, musta bin so hard to mix.. where on earth do you got your car crash sounds ... and for that matter your lyrics ??  Don't wanna go glossy but I love this ... well done that man ??

SRM

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Jesse -- you have outdone yourself.  This is outstanding!  I had a smile as big as all outdoors while listening to this.!!  A wonderful vignette of every day life of those who work 11 to 7 at the 7-11.

Most Cool!!

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